You know, it's been a long time since I laughed that much ^^ I hope their will be more of the twins' stories!

I just finished reading this series and wanted to say that Dev and Beau are adorable and I really enjoyed them. I hope to you continue this story arc in the near future.

I love it!

I have been enjoying the twins even if the lisp is hrd to work out at times.

So is Vin a Sentinel or not and if he is who is the Guide nd who the Watcher. In many of your other ones it is Chris but he seems to match the Watcher moe in this one nd Ezra has lot of Guide attributes and his getting purfect stuff toy matches for the twins spirit animals is supisious. I think Ezra would make a good guide for this Vin, Chris is fitting in more as the Watcher which in a weird way makes sense as Vin and Ezra are emotionally damaged such pair would need an incredibly strong and territorial Watcher they trust Vin's conection to Chris would be about the only reason Vin took the chnce on nother Watcher especilly with a baby Sentinel and Guide to watch out for even if they were with Shannon at that stage. Travis is in many ways to distant to be a Watcher for a Sentinel and Guide
In old Celtic terms Chris as chieftian who runs the clan and Travis as high cheiftain who looks after many clans.

An intersting way of looking at it would be Vin's Ranger team became his clan Capt'n Jim the Alpha Sentinel training the junior sentinels and guides the they were a big happy family.

They got betrayed first lost the Alpha Sentinel and the men with him them the second betrayal took out most of warriors leaving the dependents total mess Chris as the Watcher becomes very important in this case as Vin needed Chieftan he could trust to heal and raise the babies. I can easily see the surviving family of Vin's old team drifting back to settle around either Vin or Jim now that the betrayer is taken out.

Shaz

Ms Rosemary needs more than to be flexible apparently. Although I would certainly want to find out why she took the truck away. And she was getting exasperated at being made to look foolish by the twins. that would explain the harder than normal grip which explains the bruise. Doesn't excuse it just explain it. Unless you plan on taking the story into the realm of daycare workers who abuse their charges. Poor Rosemary. Vin Tanner is highly protective of his sons. Team 7 probably isn't much better. I don't imagine Jim is going to be altogether happy either. Looking forward to reading the rest.

Sounds like Rosemary needs to be a bit more flexible. Jim and Blair needed to tell the daycare people these were not ordinary children. I don't mean the Sentinel/Guide thing either. Just raised differently. Well done story wise, though. Amusing and entertaining. Although a more thorough scolding or spanking might be put to good use here. Believe me as smart as those two are they know they are doing wrong. They are just trying to get out of daycare since they didn't want to go. Well done at portraying them. I like the story. Keep writing.

Oh that's much better! Great story as usual and I love the twins to death! Now, who is the twin's watcher, hm? Oh and thank you so very much for explaining why the twins went on walk about. A very reasonable explaination for them to take off too!

I Love this series. I am so glad to see monday's adventures up.Please tell me you have the other days of the week ready to go. I don't think I can wait too long to see what happens next. Boy I don't want to be that Rosemary after Blair & Jim talk to her and you know Team 7 will have to have a few words with her. Please update this series soon. This is an outstanding series!

I knew there was a reason I didn't like Rosemary. She's lucky Chris and Vin aren't around, she'd be in a world of hurt. Great story, they sure are a handful. Love the way you're developing them. Looking forward to more of this great series. Take care,
Mouse

Did ya win? Oh man I loved this, it was great! I tell ya if laughter really is the best medicine, this series has got to be a cure-all. Off to read ch. 2. Take care,
Mouse

Love it. I had to take care of my niece at times when she was little, and have always had a bit of sympathy for the parents who "just turned their back for a second". As opposed to the idiots who let their kids run around doing whatever they pleased, but that's a rant for another time.

I loved the Watcher bit coming into play. Ever notice that most of the characters are archetypes? Simon the Chieftain, Jim the Warrior, Blair the Shaman, Joel the Elder, Megan the Amazon, H the Trickster... I've got a story along those lines percolating, and was wondering if you'd also keyed into it.

Oh, and Rosemary needs a good talking-to. Hopefully by Jim. That would be an... interesting conversation- probably requiring blast shields for those in the vicinity.

*wiping tears of laughter from my eyes* Oh boy, this was GREAT! The boys high fiving each other at being kicked out of daycare 'bout made me fall outta my chair! *still snickering*

Hey, I like this Watcher bit. How did Beau know about it and not Blair? *curious*