 Artisan Brown 2009-10-23 . chapter 3Oh, hey, not bad. At first I was a little peeved at some grammar errors and the POV jump in earlier chapters, but that seems to have improved by the third chapter. I can see you haven't updated this for - what - two years? But the chapters I have seen are pretty good. I like how you made Gibson more modest then the rest - it's really quite adorable. Character interactions were on the spot.
Good story. If you ever do update, I'll be reviewing. |
 Aldrea945 2008-09-14 . chapter 3This is hilarious! I hope you will continue with this. I'm really into the monkeys turning into humans to let you know. But keep being really cool and a great auther.
**(-: Aldrea945 ;-)** |
 Miss Hal Gibson 2008-04-02 . chapter 3Aw, I wanted to know what happens! Oh well...Good story anyway. |
 suzyq85 2008-01-05 . chapter 3Alright!(that's meaning awesome) |
 gemstone11 2007-10-05 . chapter 2gasp they're weepy emo monkies |
 gemstone11 2007-10-05 . chapter 1*busts out laughing* |
 Kittyfan12 2007-09-01 . chapter 3Please continue the story! I think it's awsome. It captures the depth of them turning into humans, yet it's not too deep. You're really talented and I think the plot line is great so far. If you can't remember where you were going with the plot and story then make up a new path for it. I really think this is too good of a story to discontinue. please continue it. Oh and just so you know, I will read other stories you write/ have written. |
 Khamaat 2007-08-21 . chapter 3It’s kind of sad that you’re leaving this fanfic, but I guess you can’t force a story unto someone. Love the interactions between the members, and the way you made them feel ‘human’ emotions. Great Spova! And Nova isn’t too girly! –Salutes-
Can’t wait for any new stories you post up.
-Kha’ |
 Esinololly 2007-08-20 . chapter 3WHOO! I love this story! It's a shame you're kind of dropping it though..but let me tell you! When I feel like I'm loosing steam on a fanfic, I simply play around on the "writer block" fanfiction, you know? Like a filler, kinda. Since this is "humor" fanfic, you can make the next chapter as like just a chappie to explore deeper into their new human personalities and tap more into the relatioships between the cuties, you know? ;3 Have fun with it and don't be afraid! Eventually, you'll probably pick up enough steam to remember OR make up another direction of plotline for this ficcy =3
Now then, this is definatly going into my faves- I really hope you'll pick it up again someday! |
 Kittie1 2007-08-20 . chapter 3I love this! Keep up the good work! Someone should really do fanart for this... |
 Layla Fairy 2007-08-20 . chapter 3Your back yay! *hugs* Shame you are not going to continue but i'll look for your new stuff ^_^ |
 Netbug009 2007-08-20 . chapter 3This is a bad fic to read late when somebody is sleeping near you. Avoiding laughing at the spova stuff was HARD.
It's a bummer you may not continue this. Maybe you could find another writer to adopt it? It's better than leaving it there. Just a suggestion.
“She’s kind of cute as a human, don’t you think?”
“Kid, don’t even go there,”
That was WIN. :D |
 KozueNoSaru 2007-08-19 . chapter 3Aw, what fun. Gibby and Nova's convo, Chiro and Sprx's talk--loved them. The Spova fans would be proud ^_^ |
 Nara Rei 2007-08-19 . chapter 3Aw, I find it kinda sad you mite not continue, but I can understand if you lose your (Mojo)for it. I found it very interesting, I mean the out looks and the affects are great. I'm looking forward for other fanfics you write of the Hyper Forces. |
 The Emerald Shapeshifter 2007-08-19 . chapter 3I've just started reading this story. I really like it. It's funny, and I rarely find a story that makes me laugh.
That bit Chiro said about Jinmay was funny as well.
Kudos! |