Oh my god, pink hair!! First green, then brown now pink! Man, his hair just keeps changing haha. I agree with Mana, he deserved without a doubt! But that was soo cute, the way Mahado said he loved Mana like a sister... so adorable! I seriously can't imagine a lover relationship between those two, but bro-sis I can haha. Very cute story, loved it! ^-^

haha well seto used to have green hair. so why would it be so bad for him to have pink hair? good story. ^_^

Sweet! Yes! I'm glad you understand that they have a father-daughter relationship... although he is far too young to be her father, but you get the point.

Very nice portrayals.

Haha! Seth with pink hair!! I'd love to see that!!

Lovely. And truthful. Though doing that to Seto WAS petty. Plus it wouldn't win her any brownie points when Seto finds himself saddled with the job of King. Though hopefully the test and trials leading up to that would them BOTH more mature.

That last part is so funny! I love this! Maybe you can make a part two when the priestess trys to make Priest Seto's hair back to brown. XD

I loved this little look into the relationship between Mahado and Mana...very sweet and very well written. I think you've captured the realtionship between master and apprentice quite well. This is definitely going in my favorites pile. And I have to agree with Mana...Seto deserved it. Thanks for that mental image; I nearly died laughing! Great job.

Seto with pink hair! I love it!

Well written, and nice build-up to the anti-climax. ;)

Keep Writing! :)

Ilaughed so hard that I nearly fell off my chair when I read that Mana changed Seto's hair pink. I agree he did deserve it and I say Yeah for Mana. I loved how Master Mahaado tried to repremand Mana and how patient and kind he was with her.. I loved this story, thanks for writing it... Great Job... Going on my favorite story list...