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Reviews For: Playing Father

SOnicHerO100
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseHaha! Seth with pink hair!! I'd love to see that!!
Alex Warlorn
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseLovely. And truthful. Though doing that to Seto WAS petty. Plus it wouldn't win her any brownie points when Seto finds himself saddled with the job of King. Though hopefully the test and trials leading up to that would them BOTH more mature.
Kakashi-GF0528
2007-05-20
ch 1,
abuseThat last part is so funny! I love this! Maybe you can make a part two when the priestess trys to make Priest Seto's hair back to brown. XD
whiteswan
2007-02-10
ch 1,
abuseI loved this little look into the relationship between Mahado and Mana...very sweet and very well written. I think you've captured the realtionship between master and apprentice quite well. This is definitely going in my favorites pile. And I have to agree with Mana...Seto deserved it. Thanks for that mental image; I nearly died laughing! Great job.
Tutankamun
2007-01-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseSeto with pink hair! I love it!
Krafty Quill
2007-01-17
ch 1,
abuseWell written, and nice build-up to the anti-climax. ;)

Keep Writing! :)
journey maker
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseIlaughed so hard that I nearly fell off my chair when I read that Mana changed Seto's hair pink. I agree he did deserve it and I say Yeah for Mana. I loved how Master Mahaado tried to repremand Mana and how patient and kind he was with her.. I loved this story, thanks for writing it... Great Job... Going on my favorite story list...
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