great story. Is Box Lunch a real character from the show? I do love Danny/Ember. Heh. Danny will have to deal with the fruitloop now.

...HAHAHAHAHAHHA! OMG, that was so insanely hilarious!! I absolutely loved the part with the field and the flowers...hah!! oh goodness, now my roommate's giving me those strange looks again...:D lol!

~TSW~

Woah, it's been a while since I said I'd review this. I plead procrastination and memory loss.

So... A lot of the scenes with Danny and Boxy (let's call him Boxy, it's more fun) were quite amusing, though I think with a bit tighter writing they'd have been better. I liked the integration of the godparent bit at the end. Is there going to be a sequel with Danny and Ember, or are you going to just leave it to the readers' imaginations? Actually, I think the imagination might be better...

A few nitpicky things, though... First, you'd got a beautiful tense change from past to narrative present about halfway through the Queen section. Second, I'm finding it a bit of a stretch of the imagination to fit all the stuff Danny and Boxy do together into a week, around classes and ghost fighting. Third, I didn't really get the feel, even though Danny was scowling, that he was upset with Boxy at the fair, so the blasting at the end there was a little jarring.

So, um, anyway, it IS a decent piece of crack, overall and a fun read. Next!

~Esme

It's...done? (Tears up) Your very first crack fic! Oh, I'm so proud...

Heheh, yeah, anyway, WOW. Ember. Totally wasn't expecting that. But then, I have no room to talk, what with "Dream Girl" and all. I feel just a little bit sorry for the Box Ghost, getting the crap beaten out of him all the time. But it was funny! Hilarious story...post a new crack fic soon!

Oh my. Poor Danny. *grins* Living with the Box Ghost definitely was an interesting experience for him and then being set up with Ember? And having to go visit Vlad with her? Definitely torture, though hilarious for us.

And naming Danny the God-parent of Box Lunch- priceless. You have to write a fic now, where Danny baby-sits.

(laughs)Aw!It's over already (laughs more)This was TOO funny I loved it!You are SO ,like, my favorite author EVER! See ya next time!

Oh yeah, that was funny. Great job! Jolly good work! Keep up the good writing.

THAT IS SO FUNNY! I like it! hope u continue righting!! YAY!! :) ;) :P ;P :D ;D ^_^ *_* @_@ $_$ MONEY! :P

XD Oh, yeah, that was AWESOME. I LOVE THE BOX GHOST! HE'S AN AWESOME CHARACTER!

XD

~Sasia~

Muah, this was too funny! XD The song made it even funnier!! The part with Ember was great, too. :) Glad you wrote it! I'm also glad people are using my forum. O.o, I'm shocked. XD

oh...my god. what a hell of a week that would be.


ah wisconsin, no offense to anyone who lives there...but a lot of times i've noticed people seem to consider wisconsin a third hell. i cant even mention the second hell, its to horrible.


hope to read you again.


and for the last time on this story...


the elephants stole my weed.

Hilarious ending! Danny and Ember... well, it could had been worse, considering it was The Box Ghost who arranged the date.

Keep the good writing.

damn!...that would succk. but it so funny. ha.


PLEASE! update when you can!=]


the elephants stole my weed.

Hehe, this sounds promising. Keep up the good stuff!

Freakin hilarious, I KNEW you could pull it off! Oh and thanks for calling me wonderful. Update soon!