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| GSRfan719 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abusethis is great! |
| mishy-mo 2007-01-15 ch 1, | abuse:) |
| housemdisthebest140906 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was great, but it was a real shame to leave it at that, maybe you could do a sequel or another chapter? |
| The Origami 2007-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty good ^^ A few areas could have been better, and I don't think the tense was the best choice for this, but there was a couple of lines that were really brilliant in here =D I loved, "Good for Wilson. He wasn’t suffering." and "She was half-sprinting to Cuddy’s office. She’d changed her mind." - they were my favourite bits ^^ Anyway, keep writing, you've got real promise :3 -Gabunny |