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Reviews For: The Ending of the Beginning

GSRfan719
2007-01-19
ch 1,
abusethis is great!
mishy-mo
2007-01-15
ch 1,
abuse:)
housemdisthebest140906
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseThis was great, but it was a real shame to leave it at that, maybe you could do a sequel or another chapter?
The Origami
2007-01-14
ch 1,
abuseThis was pretty good ^^ A few areas could have been better, and I don't think the tense was the best choice for this, but there was a couple of lines that were really brilliant in here =D I loved, "Good for Wilson. He wasn’t suffering." and "She was half-sprinting to Cuddy’s office. She’d changed her mind." - they were my favourite bits ^^
Anyway, keep writing, you've got real promise :3
-Gabunny
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