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| skyz 2007-03-18 ch 5, anon. | abuseAwesome story here. I would love to see a sequel to this. You did a wonderful job with getting into Sara's head. Thanks for posting this. |
| CSI Ali 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a beautifully written story. I must admit, when I read in the original authors notes that this was going to be in the second person I was sceptical, because the only other stories like this I've read were not very well done, but this was just perfect for this story. There aren't words for how much I enjoyed this. I too hope there's a sequel in the works. :) |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-27 ch 5, | abuseThis is why I love Catherine. Great Story!! Update Soon Son!! |
| dolphin18paradise 2007-01-27 ch 5, | abuseI hope there will be sequel in the works. |
| another9 2007-01-26 ch 4, | abuseIt's awesome so far! I can't wait to see what happens next. |
| stareagle 2007-01-26 ch 4, | abuseThis storyis blowing my mind. I am a confirmed GSR fan - femme slash has no appeal to me. But the importance of woman to woman friendships and how to express intimacy in same sex friendships has become so complicated now that every touch, glance and comment is analyzed through sexual filters. You are on to an important theme here- That Sara and Catherine would be open to bi-relationships does not surprise me due to their backgrounds. (Grissom has demonstrated openminded- ness witness his relationship with Heather. This could become a 3-some - between three very good friends, perish the thought- though I just can't quite wrap my head around that one! Anyway.) I hope you will preserve their friendships in all this. I hope you will preseerve the love GSR because loyalty is a very strong factor in the appeal to Grissom's character. I am tired of seeing him hurt because of expressing vulnerability - as awkwardly as he doees it! Anyway. Thanks for an interesting and unusual saga. |
| dolphin18paradise 2007-01-25 ch 4, | abuseI love it! I'm actually gonna have this on my alert list. Next update is soon I hope. |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-25 ch 4, | abuse**' Grissom man!! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| elite77 2007-01-25 ch 4, | abuseThat story must be one of the best I read in a very long time! Thank you for sharing. |
| ButterfliesForHer 2007-01-22 ch 3, | abuseYou're a genius, you really are =D More please! |
| bene 2007-01-21 ch 3, | abuseI really like the way you translate into words what Sara is going through. Keep going, this is excellent. Thank you! |
| Uriel Falcon 2007-01-21 ch 3, | abuseNice Drama Angst. Works well, played out perfectly. |
| Gryffindor620 2007-01-21 ch 3, | abuseOh I feel for Sara! Great Chapter!! Update Soon Son!! |
| ButterfliesForHer 2007-01-19 ch 2, | abuseUpdate. Soon. Please. |
| Uriel Falcon 2007-01-18 ch 2, | abuseThe last line is the kicker. Totally awesome fic, lovely style. It's nice to see someone else out there doing something different. |