WOW! this story is so.. allureing. Every character has a past and feeling and there are SO MANY characters. I like this.

What a sensational chapter. (Ahaha, no pun intended.) And I'm glad they've made up. ...And the implications are oh-so-intriguing.

Ah. I thought so. It would be the only way it could work... Uh, yeah, amazingly true-to-life (in the HP world, that is), amazing backstory.

Finally, more clues! Brilliant, the interactions between the characters. Just brilliant and real and touching.

Wow. Witty dialogue, realistic reactions. The plot grows in complexity...

Humor, drama, angst, well-developed original characters, well-characterized canon characters, a mystery... What more could I ask for in a superbly-done fanfiction?

As the story progresses, the backstory reveals itself. Or perhaps the backstory is the REAL story, and this merely serves as a setting to tell it in... Okay, well anyway, excellent chapter.

Fascinating. The children are well-developed, as is the mystery of Rory's mother.

I haven't read an original character fic in HP fandom so riveting since the Slytherin Rising series. I love your ideas- continue at your leisure, but I hope you do.

You’re great. Brian, Rory, Jim and all the other children of our beloved characters, they're so well-made. Though I must admit all the weaslys confuse me a bit. Now, get on with it! I really want to see how it all turns out, who did what with whom?

wow great story!

PLease finish this story!

You haven't updated since the third of febuary.

Oh, and is Hermione Granger, Rory's mum? Because there is quite a bit of evidence suggesting that.

I love this story! It seems you have a stablizied plot under this and I'm dying to read what happens next. I love the characterization and all the characters you make up. I also like the slow romance you have between Jim and Rory. Please, I beg you, update! Don't leave a good fanfic in teh dust!

Wow, this is an amazing story! So many twists and turns... It's amazing what geniuses such as yourself can come up with. Evil, evil, evil Skeeter! She really has something against the Chang-Potters... What is up with the age difference between Jim and Brian? Is Rory's mum a Muggle? It's such a good story, update soon, s'il vous plait!- Mlle. Jennifleur

P.S. I read some of your other one shot fics. They're really good, but I don't have the time, patience or creativity to review them. So I decided to tell you here that they rock :D

Oh, lovely, lovely person that you are! I was beyond happy when I saw that you had posted not one, but TWO chapters since my last check. I'm also beyond happy that Rory and Jim have gotten back to friendly terms. Now he should really obey Reen and just snog Rory. Really. Beautifully written (especially the dialogue). Hurry up with more, and happy writings!