realilly: You should read the books before you try to give a fair review to the author. The Mayflower, in short, was a spaceship sent out by NASA with eighty people aboard that was supposed to keep flying through spce until it detected a habitable planet. It contained what part of human history the US could get, and personell including the President and her son. Etc., etc., etc. It's a Sci Fi series.
Charmed Ravenclaw: Overall, not a badly written story, although I agree that the "religious ride" is inaccurate. Try to research this information if you want your stoy to sound better. And, the Bible shoul be capitalized. Also, as far as I know, they never mentioned Mo'Steel's grandmother's name, although she was mentioned a few times.

Hmm.. that was a very interesting way of looking at it. I really liked it! Don't worry about including religion or not, it's YOUR story, so do what you feel is best. I really liked it!

Wow, this is very interesting. Concept of how the world will end strikes me as a bit sci-fi, but that's all right. Only one thing that confuses me - this Mayflower boat? Where is it taking its passengers?

And is this a 1shot?