well i read your other reviews for this story and i wanted to write one of my own. even though one of the other reviewers said that you didnt like the reviewers that said that your a good writer so write a sequel but i have to tell you that this story has potenial for being a great long tale. you could start off will the misao and aoshi fluff and then go on with how misao fell in love with soujiro and then do the wedding. after that you could skip a few years and have them all happy and stuff but then aoshi finds them and tries to get back misao. this is just a thought that i got from reading this story. you dont have to use it, i just wanted to give you my opinion if you wanted to make a longer version of this story.
see yah!

I don't know why, but I thought the end of this was both brilliant and hilarious. Love it.

this is just amazing. i luv the way aoshi is all sure he's gonna get misao, and then soujiro comes and takes her! hehehehehehehe! please continue...it'd be really interesting if you made them announce that they were 'together' but not get married right away...so aoshi could get all mad and then get owned! i don't hate aoshi...i just think he can sometimes be a jerk and sou and mi are perfect 4 each other!

I love this...soujiro conquers aoshi with something more than swords...perfecto! I love the misao soujiro pairing...

aw... very sweet :) I loved it!

I have seriously read all your SouMi fics and only got the courage to review this piece after feeling guilty. I seem to remember in your profile (or maybe somewhere in your Author's notes in your fics) that you despise 'ooh-you're-good-write-a-sequel' reviews, so I felt I had to stop inner fangirling from surfacing.

Yet for this work -- ah, breath of fresh air for the often-too-cliche plots of SoujiroxMisao romance!

Your writing style amazes me. I have not been in the RK fandom/fanfic pages in such a long time, and when I stumbled upon your other work I decided to give it another go. And well, I am so happy I didn't chicken out. XDD

I did notice that most of your works have been one-shots. If you think this is a bad thing I tell you otherwise -- it only means your mind can cook up something short and crisp and lasting in such a short time, and that you know how to reign in your words and not let your works control you. XD

I am still swept away. SoujiroxMisao is one of my guilty pleasures!

*decides to run off and hide because she babbled*

great story! Nice twist.

COOL!! At last! A yakuza twist to the usual SouMi plot. U had me SOO worried tht Sou wldn't show >.< Lovely fic, ganbatte!

you are very creative!

Woah, sounds like the ending in some 'cowboy' film ne?YAH!SouMI FOREVER!

This is such a sweet story! Keep up the good work. ^_^

Hi!!
I like the fic but i belieave that with a little more details about it you can made a long fic. It will be perfect then.

Ciao!

Yay! I'm the first review! Great story! I liked the twist to it! I my opinion Aoshi got what he deserved cuase you can't expect a girl to be blown off for work! Keep writing your good at it. ^-^