Oh, I like this. A very nice insight into House's thoughts.

Best line: "A small prayer to a God he didn’t believe in."

Don't know why I liked that, but it hit me. :)

you captured perfectly House' thoughts and feelings at the end of the episode.. great job :)

God and peace
Vanessa :)

Ooh, I love seeing fics about the final scene from Honeymoon. Poor House. I think you did a really good job capturing his hope, and how it got crushed when he fell. And I also really liked "He knew if he fell to the floor, he’d never get up again" -- metaphorical, perhaps?

oh...nice one!