Hey, fellow NaNoWri-Mo-er here. (:

This is actually my second time reading "Shattered". I have to admit that I absolutely love it. (: Your characters are wonderful and it was such an enjoyable read.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future!

-Yiang x3

The whole story was beautifully written and I can't think of anything to say other then the ending almost made me cry.

What a beautiful story! I absolutely enjoyed reading this from chapter to chapter. Although there were time where I thought you were going to send Eiji back into the arms of Fuji. Those were the times when I was like WTF! I was beyond happy when I saw he would end up with Yuushi. To be honest Eiji is by far my LEAST favorite character from the PoT series. I find him to be rather...annoying :S So to actually find myself reading a story centred around him, then ENJOYING a story about him and finally sad to see it end is really something. I love your writing styly there were many times where I laughed while reading this and times where I felt like my heart would break especially after his encounters with Fuji and the ending...Just wnated to share my thoughts on your story even if this story concluded almost 2 years ago, it was good read!

aww eiji..

woah

welcome back eiji

yay eiji did it^^

grr atobe, wow

aww

aww fuji oishi, tachibana^^

wow

That was much to beautiful for words. Just wow. I'm mean really, wow. Fuji. . . Eiji. . . wow.

It was such a good ending... I felt like bawling my eyes out. A wonderful ending to an equally wonderful fanfic.

Literally brought tears to my eyes. I loved it and it broke my heart with such a sweet ending. Spectacular. Absolutely breath-taking.

I almost didn't read this, 46 chapters seemed so long when I was looking for something light to read and then when I started and found an abusive Fuji, who is my favorite character, I almost stopped. But I'm glad I read it. This story, actually probably a novella, was as good as anything I've read on printed, bound pages. Your characterization and plot development was fanastic. I took a break to go eat dinner, but did not stay to spend the evening with my husband like I usually do, I told him I HAD to get back upstairs and finish it. I had left off when his relationship with Yuushi was just starting and was hoping Fuji didn't find a way to wreak the happiness Eiji seemed to be finding. He certainly needed someone to "spoil him rotten" and to give that answer to his father as well was priceless. I now have tears drying on my face. I never handle the deaths of characters I've come to love well. At least Eiji got to spend the second half of his life happy, not frightened. I hope there are more of your stories posted here and if there are I'll be reading them as well. Thank you for a beautifully written (and edited) haunting story that dealt with a sensitve subject well. I know I will be thinking of it often in the days to come and I am certain I'll reread it. The next time to slow down and savor it. Today I kept wanting to know what happened next. Reading it was time well spent.