Oh my god. *Sniff* I'm really, sadly, but yet with amazment, literaly crying.

Tears are streaming down my face just as I type this!

*SOB* *CRY* *SNIFF* *BOO-HOO*

Oh this story was just so precious and beautiful! But really! Why did you have to end it where he just left him after he truelly loved him?

OH PLEASE, I'M BEGGING YOU! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL FOR THIS!

Noy trying to yell, but oh come on! That story was just so beautiful that how could you not want a sequal for it?!?

*Sniff* Anyways, gorgeous story. PLEASE SEQUAL!

Well.. this chapter was alittle confuseing and the time line in the story is weird. But other then that its realy good!

You gotta be kidding me. Good start but it just now started going down hill from here. Should've left it as an M.

AH! no! why did u stop!?!! ITS SO GOOD! I CANT WAITE! plz hury! (i love the story!)

Nice, very well written.
I only wish you could keep continuing.
I'm already thinking of a lemony scene.
xD

You stop this nonsense right now.

Dialogue is faceless and stiff, abuse of the word 'I,' overcapitalized, and things don't feel loved - at all.

This story sounds real good. Don't let the lack of reviews slow you down(it never stopped me). Hope you can continue with this. :)