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angrw
2007-11-30 . chapter 11
Nice story! This one had alot of heart to it. Thanks!
Zzee
2007-02-12 . chapter 11
Well, that's what you get for going on a short holiday - BregoBeauty finishes an entire story! LOL

I liked that ending, especially after all the dark Jackson fics you have written lately. A girl needs some love every now and then and this story certainly provided! Great job, BregoBeauty, a good idea well executed.
Kaikamahine Mai Hawai'i
2007-02-11 . chapter 11
Yay! You did it! Congrats! Now, let me just call in that Mafia hit for your homework ... :)
blackXheart
2007-02-11 . chapter 11
It's over? Damn it!! *sighs* Oh well... *thinks she's said this before* All good things must come to an end.

This chapter was awesome!! I really enjoyed this story!!
blackXheart
2007-02-11 . chapter 10
Poor Lisa... she must be really depressed about her Dad. But to do what's she's doing... (as stated before) she's got guts.
blackXheart
2007-02-11 . chapter 9
She actually left... SHE LEFT HIM THERE! *heaves a depressing sigh* I know he wanted her too, but she DID it!! Wow... she's got guts. *shakes head*
YourVampireLestat
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
Goo bye typos! I'll miss you!

YAY! I knew your wouldn't do it! I knew you were still loyal! I knew you wouldn't...COULDN'T kill Jackson...for he is God!
plays-with-stars
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
I didn't think it was sappy. I thought it was cute. Yay, for deciding against killing off Jackson. Even if I did know your decision in advance. haha. Now Jackson and Lisa can live happily ever after. Like that could ever really happening considering Jackson's past and his old job.
athena
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
woow... that was fast. And it made me really happy. It is kinda clifie, which makes me even happier ;)
Royalty09
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
Well, they can't all be gloomy endings. We have to have a happy one every now and then. Thanks for the wonderful sappiness!
emptyvoices
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
That must have been painful to pull out the IV on her own. I sure would scream. Guess she's pretty tough. Anyway, a good finish and I'm glad he's not dead...hope to hear another story from you soon!
WHITE ANGELS WINGS
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
HI,BREGOBEAUTY

EXCELLENT ENDING.LISA LOST EVERYONE SHE REALLY LOVE.SHE GOT BACK AT THEM FOR TAKEN THEM WAY FOR HER.SHE THOUGHT JACKSON WERE DEAD.WHEN SHE FOUND OUT JACKSON STILL ALIVE.SHE BE CRY FOR HIM.I THINK SOME POINT SHE REALY LOVE HIM. SHE TRY TO SAVE HER. NOW THEY HAVE EACH FOREVER.THEY GOT TO FACE ANYONE WHO TRY TO HURT AGAIN.THEY WILL FACE AGAIN. FORM ME TO YOU 4 STAR ALL WORTH READING IT. SEND YOU A BIG SMILE FOR HAPPY READER:>.

LOVE, WHITE ANGELSWINGS
WalkingInDarkness737
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
Yay! Sappy ending or not, I'm very happy now. Good job!
Iwillalwaysbeyoursinmyheart
2007-02-10 . chapter 11
AW! I loved it!
athena
2007-02-10 . chapter 10
Thanks for the response... those are great news. This Jack and his redhead do deserve a happy ending ;)
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