it's really short and general. get in depth with it. how does he feel. I want to know what he feels. Anyways thanks for doing that anyways.

YAY! NEW CHAPTER! now I want another one. waiting for these chapters are exhausting! lol please write fast cause there are a lot of gaps in mine and I want to see what you do.

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MusicIsMySoul

two words...loved it!

haha I love it! update faster! oh wait you wanted cookies right? Chocolate ship or peanut butter? Well to late you get Internet cookies.

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COKIE!

HAHA yay! finally a new chapter! now I want another one. I know DEMANDING but I love the way you write. Hope your having fun with my story...well your story about my story...that doesn't make sense but yet it does!

MusicIsMySoul

hey

whats the deal I wanna know more I mean my story only has one more chapter and your dodaling around doing nothing HURRY UP AND UPDATE!

okay okay im reviewing HAPPY? lol anyways i like the concept that Gareth's father did...not saying its good just saying it explains the decease in my story so yeah. I like it so far KEEP GOING! when does Hayley come in cause i was just wondering lol so yeah awsome job

xoxox

MusicIsMySoul

ps what was with your chapter review on 'L.A.D.O.N'?

WOW i like it very cool twist on my original story! i like the discritiveness. Gareth sounds like a very cool guy lmao! well keep uodating i wanna read more!