Oh, please continue! Please, please!

This is a really intriguing story. I also like that its written very well and that your spelling, grammar, and punctuation are spot on. In the fanfiction world, its very hard to come across a fic where there's proper spelling, grammar, and punctuation, and where the story is just as engaging. Those fics are few and far between, but your fic is great so far.

I loved the rhyme and the fact that John revealed it to Pocahontas. It makes him a key part of the story as the revealor of the prophecy, even though he probably won't appear in the story anymore after Chapter 2. Concerning the Disney Pocahontas universe, I don't care for historically accurate fics, as Pocahontas and John Smith had a very beautiful relationship However, a historically accurate fic (Where Pocahontas ends up with John Rolfe typically) can be really good, so long as its written well, both John Smith and John Rolfe maintain their dignity, and doesn't go against the original. That's where "Pocahontas II: Journey to a New World" screwed up. Badly. It was a nice twist, though, having John Smith be the one who reveals the rhyme to Pocahontas.

This fic has me dying to know what's going to happen next. I hope you update soon! :)

Oh, please update soon, this is very good so far and I can't wait to see what happens. Thomas is my favorite character too!

I've always liked Nakoma and Thomas for some reaosn, like when watching the first movie I thought they'd be cute together.

This needs to
be continued. It
must be the best
fiction in the
whole Pocahontas
section.

Historically accurate, and yet she has conversations with a willow tree? :D I love it!

Very well written, with great dialog and a cute and interesting storyline. As for the accuracy, I think it's about time we got some of that in our Pocahontas stories!

I am an avid Thomas fan. There are only 10 stories with him in it, and two are slashy and one is not romantic. This is decent, and HISTORICALLY ACCURATE! Therefore, when I find a good fic, I latch on to it like a mosquito to a helpless victim. So, when I find that said fic HAS NOT BEEN UPDATED...I get mad. Very mad. As in, "UPDATE! PLEASE! I AM IN AGONY!!" kind of mad. So, please, update this story. A very smart alien is out there who wants to hear more about Thomas. And Nakoma. And marriages. UPDATE! SOON! PLEASE!

--SMARTALIENQT :)

I'm really liking this so far. It's good to find someone who actually makes to an effort to write a historically accurate fic.

But mostly I'm happy because Thomas is a main character. :D

i really like this, please continue!

Lolz! Lon's all pissed! XD I like this story! Keep going! I hope there's more of Ben in this, he's my fav. XD

Ha keep going I want to know more.

Historical accuracy is a good thing (I'm a history major), I've played with it, most just like freedom of unrestrained creativity. I like this fic. Keep up the great work and I want to see more from you.

Liking it so far. I swear watching Pocahontas when I was little turned me Pagan. And yay for accuracy, nobody gives a shit about that anymore (starts ranting a la old lady).

The only thing was it's Radcliffe not Ratcliffe (I think: haven't seen it for ages.)

Anyway: yay for writing this. UPDATE!


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Interesting little ryme..this chapter was great!
Here's to hoping you'll finish this!

Very very interesting, I wonder if you will finish this!
Interesting thoughts Thomas has on the Natives, I wonder what you see happening in this story? Well done, I look very much forward to an update.