Reviews for Ain't Tough Enough

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marauders4evr 2008-07-24 ch 24,	abuseI love this story so far! Update soon please. I really want to know what happens between Holly and Kyle. They are so cute together!
Rachel eckstein 2008-04-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!PLZ I NEED A GOOD OUTSIDERS FAN FICTION
Arie 2008-03-25 ch 24, anon.	abuseThe story is really great. I would be so happy if you kept writing!
Truth or Desire 2008-03-09 ch 8,	abuseOMG OMG plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon! I love this stories so much!
crockergirl 2008-03-07 ch 6,	abuse“I’m a night,” What does that mean? I've been racking my brain for what it means but can't figure it out! Anyway, lovely chapter and the long chapters you have are really nice.
crockergirl 2008-03-07 ch 5,	abuse“Ponyboy,” Darry said calm and demandin’ like he always ended up soundin’, “Answer your sister.” Wow, that sounds exactly like my dad. Exactly like him! Wonderful dialogue, as usual. "Ready to start the best day of our lives." It's good how you ended this about the same as the last chapter. Though it makes me think that it might not be the best days of their lives...
crockergirl 2008-03-07 ch 4,	abuseThis is another amazing chapter! How do you always manage to make them so good? I love how you are starting to get into the original story, but also adding your own dialogue and descriptions.
crockergirl 2008-03-07 ch 3,	abuseI have a brother named Kyle... Of topic, yes, but I thought it was worth mentioning. I like how you added a bit of Darry's past in there, even if it was a little... interesting. =)
crockergirl 2008-03-07 ch 2,	abuseI love how all the boys are really protective of Holly. Being the youngest (and only!) girl in my family, I know what it feels like to have them want to protect you no matter what and you portrayed it nicely.
crockergirl 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseGood first chapter and you did really well with describing the characters. On to the next chapter!
hellogoodbyeTM 2008-01-27 ch 24,	abuseI LOVE THIS! your a freaken genius. i've always been thinking about doing a Curtis sister fic, but never like this! UPDATEE!
ElOsoDelNieve 2008-01-27 ch 24,	abuseYES! New chapter! :D IF I haven't said this before, I'll just say it: this is an absolutely amazing story. Please add a new chapter soon! I'm absolutely DYING to know what will happen next.
Dobby101 2008-01-27 ch 24,	abuseHey Cassie! No need to say how happy I am this is up. =D But I'm sorry that it took me this long to review...I read it this morning, but then I had to get ready for school tomorrow [new classes] and softball and dog stuff. Anyway, I have my guesses as to where Dally is, like with Pony and Johnny maybe? I kinda don't want him to be though, because that means, if everything goes according to the book, Johnny's going to be dead soon. And I love Johnny. =) I know this review isn't going to be as long as my last one...just because I think that this chapter was more explaining stuff than actiony. I love the explaining stuff though, it just means a very short review. Angela seems like a real b*h. She's so mean I just wanted to go into the story and punch her in the face. Not that I would ever do anything like that. It would have helped Holly though. I think. =S Kyle seems sweet though and I love how Holly went into depth (or rather you went into depth) about the whole holding hands thing at the end. It was sweet and Holly-ish. I'm a huge Kyle/Holly shipper right now and I know I might regret it later and I'll come back with a review like Oh my God, I HATE Kyle Becker [?] right now! Anyway, I'm skimming through the chapter and I just realized that I have to go back and re-read because I missed a lot the first time (maybe break up paragraphs a bit more?). It could also be that I was tired when I read it because my friends had just gone home from sleeping over. So, I'm only at about 300 words, but once I get a chance, I'll re-read and review more...not to mention my reviewing skills are a bit rusty. So, if chapter 25 comes out before I get a chance to review again, I'll just try for an extra long review next time! Happy writing! ~Tamara
My-Arabian-Knight 2008-01-27 ch 24,	abuseFirst of all . . . . .FINALLY! YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES! I am SO glad you updated! Wow, this was a long chapter. When you write you really write. I loved how Angela came up to her in the hall. I can't believe that they actaully hung out as kids. I'd think that her parents wouldnt want them near eachother like Darry doesn't really like them near eachother. I'm glad Kyle came to her rescue. I like Kyle, he's a nice character. I wonder what his and Angela's secret was. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see what's going to happen between him and Holly. Love it! Great job writing!
crockergirl 2008-01-26 ch 24,	abuseAnother terrific chapter! Please update soon!

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