XD i love it !

haha so funny!

Wha... that's so mean and I almost started dreaming of what was going on to find out it was a game and not the game I usaully read about...funny though not mad about ending just shocked...Angle out

NO! WHY?!?!? WHY?!?!? OMG! No, JK, even though I thought it was THAT...it was a good story and it got me laughing my lunch out at the end! Then I realized I totally missed out on a really hot scene...

WHAT! I THOUGHT THEY WERE HAVING GOOD MAN SEX

lol oh wow
and here my little perv mind was sneakin into all sorts of fantisies lol well anyhoo thx 4 writing

lol, wow. my mind was in the gutter..until that last sentence. great story! ;D

O_O I am awed yet again by your awesome writing skills. Damn, you should write mature anyways. Just write warning, lemon or something! I KNOW U CAN WRITE 18+ AND I HOPE U DO! Pretty please *chibi eyes*

Damn dude!! XD My mind was in the gutter...LOLz

This made me giggle a lot x3

lol...that was so random yet hilarious

YOU GOT MY HOPES UP!YOU MEANIE!

Good one! I like the surprise ending.