Why'd you never finished this one? Seems good.

Promising start. Look forward to more.

oh,new maxwell fic...very very promising...please update soon.

louise

Love it! Not really great feedback is it? But I do. Okay, here's a bit more. You do a great job depicting how Detroit must've been back then (or is now? Dunno, never been there). You get a lot into one chapter, can't wait for more! I'm curious how your "In the Light" stories are going to merge together, or have I been missing some clue (wouldn't be the first time, of course... Get a clue, Sherlock! was one of the favorite sayings of my siblings.)

Warning: this review done while working on first cuppa JOE in the morning.