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tomandtish
2007-05-19 . chapter 6
I enjoyed this story a great deal. The progression seemed realistic, even Kara/Leoben (Leoban? I've seen it spelled both way :D )

I tend to notice small things, and this probably won't be noticed by most readers (and isn't a big deal, just one of those little things). How did Boomer know where the fleet was after 3 years and have valid codes (after 3 years, it's a safe bet the codes have been changed)? With Kara presumed dead, it's a safe bet they weren't hanging around. For Boomer to know means that there's still a cylon presence on Galactica, or that Sharon is somehow able to communicate with her. That would be interesting to see addressed.
jandjsalmon
2007-03-16 . chapter 20
*standing ovation*

Wonderful job. Really smashing! YAY for you! ;)
jandjsalmon
2007-03-16 . chapter 19
*wipes tear*

Love the party. It's all so wonderful.
jandjsalmon
2007-03-16 . chapter 17
Wow, who knew? I actually liked Dee here. Great job.
jandjsalmon
2007-03-16 . chapter 16
AHGHG. Again,woman! So good.

"I don’t actually need permission to leave anymore, do I?” Very very Kara.

and then "early in life, she'd decided that it hurt less to be the one doing the leaving instead of the one being left." That sums up Kara perfectly!

and then the cut! GAH!
jandjsalmon
2007-03-16 . chapter 11
AHG! Papadama and his, "You’re still taking pretty good care of our girl, too" -- GUH!

Really really good!
jandjsalmon
2007-03-16 . chapter 6
How much do I love this? LOTS! I was involved in that beyond_insane convo - I'm a mod there - and I love that you finally wrote this. Loved this scene in particular - with Boom. Really Really good. *off to reading more*
jamy21
2007-02-15 . chapter 20
Yay! I knew they'd get together. Happy me! Lovely ending, if only the show could do it so well.
solo-girl-br
2007-02-14 . chapter 20
Great fic. I wait for more and more.
Thanks for that.
gibgirl4
2007-02-14 . chapter 20
Awesome read! Thanks so much for sharing and i'm looking forward to your sequel's.
starbuck042786
2007-02-13 . chapter 20
I like this ending much better! im glad your roommate protested! GREAT STORY! I really enjoyed it
grump2348
2007-02-13 . chapter 20
Great story, Can't wait to read more of your work!!
pilotlover
2007-02-13 . chapter 20
Sque. They did get married. Aw. And Kacey still does not want to leave Kara...aw.

Well, I'm sorry to see this end but happy for the happy ending.

Thank you so much. Looks forward to your next projects.

Regards.
Marilyn
NicB
2007-02-13 . chapter 20
I loved this story! I'm sad it's over. You should definitely do a sequel to this one, too.
jamy21
2007-02-12 . chapter 19
Perfect part, absolutely perfect. You made me tear up a little at the end, when Kara started to tell Lee what happened. I love that you have him as being the one she reaches out to, like it would have been on the first two seasons of the show. I love Sam, but I miss the Kara and Lee of before, when they were eachothers other halves. Lee is almost unrecognizable now, it's sad. This is a good Lee. Can't wait for more!
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