Wow...this story was so full of imagery, that I could picture the scene in my head. It almost felt like I was also there. Great job! You have a lot of potencial to become a very successful writer! and I mean it!

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I'm sorry but I don't get your story. Could you please tell me what's it about because I've read it twice and I still can't get. Anyway beautiful writng. Very detailed. I like your writing.