Reviews for Within Striking Distance

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Seemee 2007-07-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseSQUE! I love this so much I nearly died from the pure awesomeness. You win at life,you win at Xiggy/demmy,and you win at one-shot collections. Thus, I give you a flaming mer-bunny. for both the first and second chapters. In all her fangirlishness, Seemee the bunny queen.
Little Pastry 2007-07-07 ch 2,	abuseThis is great. I haven't actually seen much like it -- it includes Axel and Roxas before the friendship AND it's not Alternate Universe. Also, it has an adorable Demyx who is unable to stand! Very cute.
Northsky 2007-06-03 ch 2,	abuseOh yay! You're going to write more chapters! Yay!!
Anthrax Pretzels 2007-05-25 ch 2,	abuse-eyes get big- You..you...characterized them FLAWLESSLY... @_@ Finally, a fic with snarky! Roxas. I missed that little guy :D Lovely story, and very fluid, with interesting humor...Priscilla...XD I'm never looking at Oathkeeper the same way again... Looking foward to more of these one-shots... Pretzels
RedGems 2007-05-22 ch 2,	abuseYou made more! Great! I love your characterization of the characters you use.
sexypancake 2007-05-05 ch 2,	abusei REALLY like this story! this is only really the second KH2 story i've found with XigDem and Akuroku that i LIKE. i also really like that it's pre-game. i hope you include more xigdem next chapter. maybe somehow, dem can change into a merman!! lolz. i'm also really happy to read your writing again, since your YUGIOH days. ^_^
God of Laundry Baskets 2007-04-13 ch 1,	abuseWow.. I really never thought of how much thought goes into standing.. XD I loved the 'Under the Sea' referance, I started singing along with it as soon as I read that :D. Good story, amusing and entertaining! I want more but if it takes time to dish out a story like this the take the time! The characterization kept pretty true (as far as the other fanfics i've read and some other stuff I've read... Havent atcually played CoM but am looking forward to when it comes out in the US (you know it will, no way will they dare not to)) to the characters. I liked Demyx's attitude and Xigbars reaction to the sitar apperace (("still trying to accimate himself to the fact that a /non/-lethal item just appeared) XD). But I felt that Demyx who was absolutly amazed and the like by walking, was barly fazed by the magical apperance of the longed for sitar. Thats the only real problem I even saw in the story. I'll be waiting (or at least hoping) for the next chapter! --insert random smily face here time two--
Northsky 2007-02-25 ch 1,	abusedemyx is a mermaid!! we! I love this story!
Angelus Eros Weiss 2007-02-23 ch 1,	abuseThat's awesome yeah! XD Demyx being from Atlantica would be so damn cool! XD
Hikari of the Moon 2007-02-09 ch 1,	abuseAww! ^^ I've read a lot of fics where Demyx's other was a merman, but none of them even mentioned that he might not be able to stand well! So I really like this. And it was SO CUTE! Demyx is a great little character!! And Xigbar seemed very in character. I loved it!! Thanks for writing it.
iggywaffle 2007-02-03 ch 1,	abuseDude, Demyx was -totally- from Atlantica. THERE IS NO DISPUTING THIS FACT. Plus, Under the Sea + Demyx = INSTANT AWESOME. Sebastian's got nothing on Demyx. Nothing. ...Demyx would so chill out with Ariel, giggle over mermen and braid her hair while listening to some kind of crazy underwater boyband, too. He's Demyx. Braiding hair is just what he does. D:
sango 2007-02-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseAWW! that was adorable
Fairia 2007-01-20 ch 1,	abuseI especially enjoyed the scene where Demyx first learned to used his new Sitar.
Silver Wolf 2007-01-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseMY TWO FAVE CHARACTERS OMIFUG tackle hugs you
Blizzaris 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuseWell, considering I've never played KH (I or II) I can't say if I agree or not with your author's note but I'm willing to bet you're right ;) You're probably thinking "Then why the hell did she both to readf a KH II fic?" Well, I have gamer friends. ANYways, that was totally off topic, but I did like your fic :) Lmao Demyx without pants... awkward! Good job though! ~blizzy

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