That was... interesting. It didn't feel right the way the romance between Artemis and Will developed - maybe if it wasn't limited by the one sentence challenge, it would have seemed more realistic. As it is, some of the lines are very good, very evocative - I particularly liked Music - and others just come off as awkward, trying to fit too much into a single sentence.

ooh, that was damn cool. and VERY interesting

Any awards you win are very well-deserved.

Amazing.

...I'm at a loss, not really sure how to feel. *Uncertainty* Uhm, I enjoyed reading certainly, but ended up somewhat uncomfortable, more because of how suddenly the smut came than anything else... In the end, very nice fic. Applause for crossing two very good series. *uneasy smile*

Wow! I love His Dark Materials! I wrote a crossover for it, too, but mine sucked. >:P