 Captain Evermind 2007-01-16 . chapter 1Hey Lucy! Wow, I loved this! Best MASH fic I've read in ages!
It's quite short, but I think that makes it more powerful somehow - it's very spare and truthful. Nonetheless, I'd still like to see it expanded a bit... they're all really interesting secrets which I'd love to see explored more fully. A couple of them in particular, like Frank's opinion of himself as a bad father, or Potter's regrets. I'd like to see Margaret's 'secret' expanded too... why did she miss Frank? And Hawkeye's. And of course, I always want more Trapper! Trapper suicide-angst is scary, but so good... *Sigh*.
Oh... and Radar knows everyone else's secret ok, but what's HIS? *Brain sparks...*
Ok, I'll shut up now. Lol! But more, please? *Puppy dog eyes* |