This starts off kind of dull, but it's been getting more interesting the more I read. Even so...I feel like I'm reading a written version of .hack//Roots, sort of.

Well, I'll reserve judgement on that until the story gets further in. Otherwise, good job so far!

hope you keep writing. don't know the game, but like reading your story. :)

i may not have a clue what is going on but it still good once i play the game i'll understand better right?

im totally lost. ive never played .Hack so i dont know anything about it but it still is very interesting. keep writing i wanna know what happens! lol

Looks like this could be really interesting. I hope you continue.