Amazing story! You described everything so well and kept them in character!

Beautiful.

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Yes, short. But yes, good. I always said you could delve into the charas minds better than most. Maybe it's the buttload of writing we're doing in English right now, but I'm noticing so many separate things you used in here instead of just the whole product. Great job!

A lot of times when you write H/K, I see my own relationship with EMOD in it, and the last sentence really hit home.

Lovely.

I like KuwabaraxYukina.

Aw, I liked this one. I gotta say, even though not a lot was mentioned about Hiei and Kurama being a couple, I still for some reason don't like that pairing; that's beside the point though. I really liked this one-shot, and I like how you described Hiei's emotions.

Very simple and beautiful. A good way of writing on how Hiei feels of said relationship and koorime's emotions. I loved how you explained the differences between Yukina's love, calm and sweet and, Hiei's, hot and raw.

Very well-written. (Your stories always are!)I can't seem to say anything different when I review, your stories always hold deep feelings and wonderful descriptions that make the reader feel within the story itself.