aww that is so cute!!
loved it!!

Aw... That was so cool/cute! And is there more? Please say yes!

Haa haa that was interesting and unique. Different to most fics involving potions...

Oh! What a great beginning! This could really be a good ficcy!
Update soon, I'll be waiting ; )

thats a really sweet ending! I like it a lot

Why stop now when u have us line, hook, and sinker? Seriously, i promise to review often if u continue the fic. Ciao!

I do love toast.

aw, gee,that was soo cute! you should definitely continue! :)

this is cute...very different angle(a nice change) you could even write a few more chapters about how lily discovers that James sees the real her...think people would like it.
props to actually correcting your grammar. it was so nice to read a story today covered in mistakes:)

like your story seems interesting...update soon

Hilarius Awesome ^^ please make another one-shot like this I love it

loved it!

It's great!! I love it!

Hahahaha. I like this so far!! Keep it up!!