thank you, that was great!

that was funny...i love the winter too because im closing to my famliy and friends too...the story was very interesting it wasnt too lovely and mushy...this is a greatt story...keep writing

Aw, this is just perfect! It totally makes sense Zuko would be like, "I don't know what to do. ;_;" since he's from the hottest place in their world, haha. So cute, and very much in character! Great job!

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first fic of yours i've read - and you're a great writer! YAY EXCITEMENT! XD (plus, zutara = love XD )

now i'm all excited about the prospect of an mtr fic written by you... \(^o^)/ *dances*

thats cute. he's so whiny

Nice. Simple. And very so much like Katara and Zuko although some would disagree that Zuko could have raised his temperature to warm himself up. But it's a fic that makes you smile.

hmm, very interesting. i like it

Good, it was in character. I can actually see Zuko doing that... You should write a sequal, or something

18 thats how hot it gets in summer here, its 3 here and -1 at night, you lucky thing. Great oneshot well done I know how Zuko feels

Same here! For the love of all that is holy, we're supposed to get snow this week. My part of the state NEVER gets snow.

Lol, poor Zuko.

lol! That's cute! It's cold where I am, but not that cold! Sometimes, including windchill it gets -40. He just cae out of the desert. He knows Zuko's pain.
Love it!

ya, you seriously did play with the timeline a little...though one thing that, though amusing, I find zuko being sold short for is all the advantages he has as a firebender; as iroh has displayed numerous times, and as zuko himself showed during season 1's finale, firebenders can create heat without flames (iroh's heated his restraints in "The Fortune Teller" and his tea in "The Drill" while zuko heated the ice while he was underwater in "The Seige of the North, Part 1" when he was infiltrating the north pole) so I doubt he'd even need the parka/gloves, let alone katara's body heat...though it still makes a good zutara moment, nonetheless...but, what are you doing with all these oneshots? you should be working on Reversal of Fortunes! your loyal fans are awaiting your updates!

Hah. Poor tropics kid, stuck in the snow. I have this great vision of Zuko in a furry parka, pouting miserably. Hehe. (It snowed here! Like, half an inch, but still! Snow!)

Very cute. It just got cold here too!

That was kind of nice. I'm not sure if I believe Zuko/Katara is going to happen from where the series is now, but I like the idea. You write it pretty well. Your best strength is that you sprinkle the story with little details, which make it feel more real.

You said that you played with the timeline, which is obvious, since the attack on the Fire Nation is supposed to happen before the end of summer, but I can live with that. This story doesn't really fit in with the current continuity in any way. I guess I'd have to read the rest of your series to understand how things got this way.

To sum up: the story doesn't make much sense in terms of continuity with the canonical series, but you write it very well, and that's what's most important.