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MissNYC83
2007-05-21 . chapter 1
When will it come to an x rated scene, honey? lol This is a really beautiful story you're writing now, sunshine... And you know Karen and Will don't let me... Cold...
Lots of kisses my cheesecake
Pamena
2007-05-19 . chapter 11
Aw, I'm so glad they finally got their acts together.lol That whole scene in the beginning was really sweet, I think I felt just as relieved as they did when everything was out in the open, and they stopped trying to hide. And then they fall out of the boat--how romantic.haha It was so cute though, I love that Will was freaking out and she's like, "chill out, man."Haha Adorable. I'm so glad that's been resolved. Grace and Jack were hilarious, but they're always entertaining when you stick them together. Okay, this guy at the end is creeping me out.lol Who the hell is that mofo? I'm totally not looking forward to whatever he has planned, but I'm sure it'll make for some interesting reading;) Thanks for updating hon, I'm already anticipating the next chapter!
cybercol
2007-05-18 . chapter 11
I'm so glad you updated! I love the W/K story..it's so romantic :)
and the end was kinda spooky.. I hope everything will work out ok.
I really love this story...please don't keep us waiting too long!
pinkbear
2007-04-29 . chapter 10
wow...it keeps getting better ans better!...I LOVE!
Pamena
2007-04-29 . chapter 10
Damn it, you tease.haha I thought you were going to show what happened between Will and Karen. You totally tricked me.lol But I love Jack in this chapter, he's hilarious. I think the best part is the note he left Grace, where he reprimands her for even finding the note, because it meant she was in his room.haha Classic Jack. I'm glad you updated, I was missing this story;) Update again soon, I'm just itching to know what's going to happen next!
Pamena
2007-04-04 . chapter 9
I'm so happy to see an update for this! And to see Will finally make a move.haha I like the little flashback in this chapter, with Will finding Karen in that bar ranting about him. That must have sucked to hear her say that, but I seriously doubt she meant it.lol I think it's sweet that he stayed there, like to look after her, and then followed her home to make sure she got there alright. I like the way you describe what's going on with those two, like the awkwardness in the boat because they were so close to each other, and the way he could barely contain himself, it's so cute.lol This was a great chapter hon, thanks for updating:) I can't wait to see Karen's reaction to what just happened, so update soon please!
cybercol
2007-04-03 . chapter 9
Yay an update..and what a great one! I really loved this chapter..and i'm glad they finally kissed! I can't wait to see what karen's reaction will be!! Please don't keep us waiting too long!
MullallyFan1023
2007-04-02 . chapter 9
Yay, an update! And that was so sweet! PLEASE don't keep us waiting too long for the next one - I love this story!
BeliceForever
2007-03-08 . chapter 8
Hm...Verly Intelesting! Casnt Wait For An Update! Is this ganna be a g/j too?
cybercol
2007-03-06 . chapter 8
Wow I love this story! It's so original and so romantic even!
I love the idea of a past life and curses etc hehe..it makes it so exciting!
I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm checking over here everyday to see if you've updated yet!
Please continue soon!
Pamena
2007-03-02 . chapter 8
Well it’s about time they finally met up!lol It was sweet how nervous they both were, it reminded me of some little 12 year olds on their first date or something, it was adorable.haha They each have something they’re dying to tell the other and they’re too afraid to say anything, but hopefully with time, they’ll stop beating around the bush:) I’m so sad to hear about Mary though, this must really suck for Karen. She left New York to get away, and it’s like trouble followed right behind her. Maybe Mary will recognize Will or something when she sees him, THAT could be really interesting.lol Great chapter hon, I can’t wait for the next one! Update soon:)
pinkbear
2007-03-02 . chapter 8
OH HONEY!... I LOVED IT!...I feel so bad for Mary though, cancer is a scary thing and painful. I can't wait to see what happens next! That whole scene with Will and Karen was flawless!
pinkbear
2007-02-22 . chapter 7
O! PLEZ UPDATE SOON! THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! :D
Pamena
2007-02-22 . chapter 7
Of course you should continue, you've pulled me in hon, you can't stop now!haha It's weird that Will and Karen are having the same types of dreams, very creepy.lol Will thinking about Karen on the plane was sweet, I can't wait until his plane finally lands and he can get to the mansion. Jack is funny, with his usual shtick, and I can tell he's really starting to get on Grace's nerves, which isn't unusual.lol Anyway, great chapter, I can't wait to read what happens next, I'm really intrigued by this whole thing. Update again soon hon!
Pamena
2007-02-09 . chapter 6
Ooh, now Will is going to Scotland? Things are getting interesting.haha It's really sweet though, how both Will and Karen have these feelings the other is completely oblivious to. And I wanted to hear the rest of what Mary was going to say!lol I'm glad she's alright though, she scared me for a minute there. Hopefully she'll be able to help Karen understand the whole story soon. I can't wait to see what happens when Will shows up at Karen's place in Scotland! Update soon:)
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