While it doesn't follow the cannon plotline per say, it's a pretty interesting take on the beginning of Aerith and Cloud's relationship. I'm especially interested since Sephiroth and Cloud are both on the side of light and claim to be from the promised land.
Well, I hope you update soon. :]

This is a very interesting take on things, icor! I can't believe I've never found this before! I really like the way you've set things up, and I am very interested to see what you will do with this, if you write any more!

Great story lovin it so far brillo start. Can't wait for more.

Very nice! I've always been interested in the FF characters in KH, and I'm glad that I've found a story that portrays them well. The style is also very real, somehow, and I greatly enjoy Sephiroth's characterization. (I had never thought about Sephiroth watching television, but now that I think about it, it actually seems in character.)

I hope you continue it!

Signed,
Agent S7

I really like this so far, it's an awesome idea! ^_^
Update soon!

Oh - I just got the title. Very clever! Greek references ftw!

Anyway, I can't say that I've ever been much interested in reading KH fanfiction - I'd rather read about the FF characters where they should be, as I'm not a huge fan of the way they were portrayed in KH. (Seriously, they turned Cloud into a one-dimensional angst muffin, Aerith lacked that sparkiness which I liked so much about her... and what the hell was Tifa doing in KH2?) Well, that notwithstanding, you sucked me in with your great writing, damn you, so I kept reading right until the end of the chapter.

And yeah, I did quite like the way you've portrayed the characters so far. Especially Cid - the tea line is always a classic. :P And Cloud's insecurity is interesting, I can definitely see him behaving like that.

So, this review has got quite long, but all I really wanted to do was compliment you on your writing. Which I've probably done before, haven't I? Yeah. It's great. Polished and flows very smoothly. There's the odd typo here and there e.g. 'while his accompaniment was less agile' - er, I don't think you can use 'accompaniment' to refer to a person. 'Comrade' would probably work better. Also, the phrase 'off of'. Always bugs me. You don't need the 'of'. And finally you wrote 'consul' when it should have been 'console'. But that's just me being nitpicky; overall it was excellent. :)

I really enjoyed this fic so far! "There's so much tension and hate better Cloud and Sephiroth in Kingdom Hearts that has no official explaination"... heheh, what about FFVII? :) *sets for fic alert*