So, I really loved your story. The plot line is fantastic and the complexities of the characters are amazing. The story was never dull, and so kept me intrigued throughout! I am on to read the following pieces of this "series." I cannot wait to finish them, as well as start your knew severus/harry story! You are a great write with a very clever mind! Thanks for your stories.

Omg I actual felt like crying in this chapter! I get too attached to storys! lol. Whe I realised he was still alive I just about ran round the house sreming 'He's alive!' Sad, I know but it was well worth it. (:

I was too lazy to review the final chapter, so the review for the whole story will be labeled as for chapter one. But only because I had to read the sequel quickly!

I truly enjoy what you've done here with this story and how things turned out. I'll leave the begging out for a continuation for another review on another story...

Oh my goodness! Oh my goodness! Oh my goodness!

I know that this story has been finished ages ago but I just found your tale through another writer's recommendation and breezed through your first story in about a week. (Doggone work for interfering with what I really wanted to do)

I've enjoyed your story all the way through and this chapter is - without a doubt - my favorite ride of them all! The angst, the results of the rooms, the action, the near 3-way combat, the kiss, the appearance of Sev and Sirius, and especially the new emergence of Seph. Outstandingly awesome!

My heart dropped and my eyes were filling when I read who went through the veil. I couldn't believe it! But the way you worked that out was some of the best writing I've seen. Fan or pro!!

Now I'm going to scurry on to the next chapter nd see what happens next. Who care that I have to be to work in 8.5 hours!?!?!? I have more important things to do than sleep!!

“In a way…” Harry said slowly, his eyes sparkling playfully. “It’s kinda like I’ll become our child, were it possible for us to make children.”
“That is the most disturbing thing I’ve ever heard you say,” Severus sneered.
OMG! I laughed soo hard at this part I nearly woke up my dad

Because I couldn't keep opinion to myself.
I love A and E the most, but that could be because I just like psychology. And I love the ways umbridge is owned/pwned.

I like it.. Well done.. :)

You are probably one of my favorite authors, ever! This was even better then BMFS!

Keep up the excellent writing!

~Lady Venamisa~

CISSA! NO! ...We need a hero...er, a rescue. Just watched Footloose...

A C D E

This storry is so great I don't even have any other words to describe it's greatness!
I know that Shadow IS Harry, but at some point I just coulden't think of them as the same person, and I came to like Shadow so much better then Harry.
Thank you very much.

I don't have the words to express how much I loved this story. I'm really looking forward to starting on the next in the series. Thank you so much for writing this. <3

You're great! Thank you for sharing this with us!
Do write some more amazing fics, for they will be read.

Yours,
Andrea

P.S: And now with the sequel...

I finally got to read the end of this and can't wait to go read the long epilogue to all of this!

-SolemnxAngel, AceDSP

"The trees didn’t care about human life or human pain. Were someone tied down between their trunks and tortured under their canopy, they wouldn’t help. They wouldn’t even notice."


Very powerful phrasing. You should be proud of that bit of writing. I would had I written it.