 hunterhay12 2009-12-17 . chapter 13i pretty much cried at the end. wierd cause i never cry:p yes i am a souless ♭!@〒(♪ get over it. ok i lie i cry when i am angy to the point of jumping out my window and going to my grand parents or going for a long run. anyways 8D i loved this fic it was pretty good. sucks that she died though. kno what is extremley wierd? The guy i like is named Wyatt and my best friend was goin out with a guy named Tyrell. creepy,no? i had a wierd though about cris right now lol he was a kravn in a box lol dunno where that came from lol great fic though. keep it up. |
 unitfive 2007-02-21 . chapter 13ok i might have gone overboard with my review and i'm sorry but this ending really made me mad that she died i was enjoying the fic until the ending lets hope that your next story has a more happier ending but you are a good author just a dissapointing ending to a great fic and i'm sorry i yelled at you hope all is forgiven |
 unitfive 2007-02-21 . chapter 12A major dissapointment why did you have to kill her off why? i'm ** off |
 london vixen 2007-02-20 . chapter 13OMG Selene died! This chapter was so sad but at the same time amazingly beautiful and peaceful. You did an amazing job! |
 london vixen 2007-02-20 . chapter 11Whoa that was awesome! I cried with laughter at the lines about Tyrell being um... castrated. Loved it! Keep up the great work! |
 london vixen 2007-02-18 . chapter 10Wow! That was awesome! The Chris torturing Selene thing is dark and creepy but makes for excellent reading! You are a very talented writer. Keep up the brilliant work! |
 TheAngelOfDeath09 2007-02-11 . chapter 8hey... please update this is a really good story... bye |
 london vixen 2007-02-07 . chapter 8I am enjoying myself! This is easily one of the best stories I've read. Great work! |
 choksantos 2007-02-07 . chapter 8damn youre good update soon please. i like the story, the way it revolves around selene. |
 london vixen 2007-01-31 . chapter 7Wow I gotta say I was not expecting Chris to be evil but its an awesome twist. Marvellous! Keep up the great work! |
 choksantos 2007-01-30 . chapter 6your good, be sure to include action(fight scenes on the coming chapters cause its goin a little dry.) please update soon. |
 loyal2U 2007-01-29 . chapter 6Im lovin it...cant wait til the next chapter! |
 london vixen 2007-01-29 . chapter 6Awesome! You have a great way of writing. Please keep up the awesome work! |
 unitfive 2007-01-27 . chapter 5hey wow i love your story its awsome check mine out if you want i just started on here yours is very cool please update thanks |
 london vixen 2007-01-25 . chapter 5I did enjoy it and will continue to be a loyal reviwer. Keep up the awesome work! |