A great story. Very funny.

“Oh great, we hit another sea cow…”

This line is what *really* cracked me up. XD

Absolutley amazing... Once again you manage to pull off yet another hilarious Mary Sue-ish adventure. Well done!

*snicker*

How did I know he was going to do that? He's a wiley man, is our Jack Sparrow. (Oh, CAPTAIN Jack Sparrow, a thousand appologies.)

Heh... love the idea of Davy Jones being stuck with a Mary Sue.

Definitely your best uber-sue yet!

These just keep getting better and better. :D

Margolo! Your sue humor is a wonderful breath of fresh air, the world needs more of it!

God, I love your Mary Sue stories. I swear you should just write a book of them. You'd probably make a small fortune, if the owners of all the copyrighted characters don't sue you first. It's a thought.

Remind me not to drink a soda when I'm reading your stories, it's safer for the computers. (*Snickers loudly as soda spayes everywhere*) good job.