I really like this story. It made me laugh out loud on numerous occaisions. Any story in which the author wages war against Sues at the very least has a sensible author. I liked it a bit better before Durza came back (but at least, unlike many characters in Teh Saviuor of Alagaesha, he has a plausible excuse for not being dead.
Please keep writing!
However, Some of the misspellings are really hard to understand in the fic-within-a-fic, so just clearing those up so it's obvious what she's trying to say, yet still stupid enough to portray her intelligence (or lack thereof) would be my only critique.

Don't listen to Bellaboo 13. This story is great. Keep going the way you are, we like it that way.

About the Parody- Very funny, but sadly so true. There are so many of these stories in all the fandoms.
About the Story withing the parody- Pathetic. Your characters are slutty, whiny, and nauseatingly vain. Your characters from the book are written worse than Christopher Paolini wrote them in the original, (and that's just sad). Please take pity on the readers of this story and get a dictionary and a VERY good beta reader or stop writing permanently.
About the Hacks-Thank you. These give these characters exactly what they deserve. I would suggest you blow up Alagaesia, as none of these characters are worth anything.
-Meg

y haven't u updated? its a really good story OMFG IT'S RUBBING OFF ON ME!

ohmygod that is hilarious and aweful and wow you would write that. it is disturbing, poor eragon, but seriously thats hilarious and i like it :) nicejob, i like your style.

Continue, please. This story is FUNNY, even if my laughing makes people look at me funny. If anyone actually wrote like the story-within-story, then I would doubt their education beyond 1st grade. And that gives 1st grade learning a bad name. T'would be funny if at the end the fic-within-fic-writer showed up to get the book back and the characters took revenge. And then another fanfic shows up at the end for a sequel. Wahahahahahahahaha!

Awsome story! Very hilarious!
Also, I love Nicci Death'sMistress's idea of an Eragon/Saphira ** part and eragon has to read it! That WOULD be hilarious!

Fake flame! Yay!
Dear Eragon Ridher: If required a sample fic they had to read over before accepting you into the fandom, there is no doubt in my mind that you would have been kicked out. "Teh Saviour of Alagaesha" is the most utterly superfluous, perverted, inarticulate, mispelled, written-while-under-the-influence story I have ever encountered. A child writing a picture book would be horrified by your butchering of the English language. (I mean, "her long red hair blower down her back"? That is not physically possible. Hair does not have lungs or any orifice from which it can consciously expell air. And even if hair could blow, the correct grammatical past tense of "blow" is "blew," not "blowed.") I hope that you will soon do us all a favor and commit seppuku, although the samurai of old would never have allowed you an honorable death and had you been permitted to carry it out (if you don't pass out at the sight of a sword, that is) it would have done nothing to restore some semblance of honor to your life.

Oh, and I have another Nasuada mutilation: Msduada. "Urgal" mutilation: Ughole (like ugh hole)
Can you make Murtagh say "That's what she said" somewhere down the line? That would be hilarious and just more proof that "Teh Saviour of Alagaesha" has corrupted him. Also, a back with Eragon/Saphira where Eragon has to read it would be golden.

May i please write a hacker chapter for this

I love this fanfic! I mean, I'm not one to put random stories onto my favorites list, but this is pure genuis. I like how all of the Alagaësian characters, good and evil, are all sort if friends now. And the Murtagh/Nasuada is cool. I also like how every character has their most hated things about the Mary Sue fanfic (like Nasuada and her name spellings, Orrin and being Arya'd, etc.) P.S. I admire your ability to think of a plotline in the Mary Sue fic.
Oh, and I have an alternate spelling for Nasuada: Nasiyazs (whoa.. even I'm surprised at how weird that came out)
Anyways, please update soon!

well then, resurrect Ajihad and bring him in!
lol
no but in another idea for a story i have i bring a bunch of characters back because you don't SEE them die exactly...
it's fun writing the reactions:)

site not sight as in website
good thought , the actual STORY part
it's a good humor fic

I think i lost some IQ points and I forgot my third birthday after reading this.

First: I thought that Estelena or whatever the ** her name is was 'palishley tan', which to me seems impossible. Either you're tan, or you're pale. I don't think there's an in-between. But, oh well, the joys of the stupidity of Sues.
Second: I love to story! And the way the Inheritance characters respond to that ** of a story. Keep it up!

I love this story, though Teh Saviour of Algasea is...creepy.
What is STFU?