 LoveBassClarinet 2009-11-28 . chapter 5 I liked the story and its prequel. It was an interesting take. I don't know where you find all these amazing ideas and find the time to write them up so well.
Defenestration is now my new favorite word ;)
Keep up the good stories, I thoroughly enjoy reading them.
Just one question though... where did the title name fit into this one? |
 pappflora 2009-11-26 . chapter 5Ohhw that was a 'cute' story...i liked it!
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 Behind The Disguises 2009-05-30 . chapter 5So I haven't read a decent TT fanfiction story for a few years now. Yesterday, I sad down and read 'RED' and 'JADE' in one day, and I have come to a conclusion: You are my literary soulmate.
Seriously. Excellent plot, witty dialogue, romance, humor, action, refreshingly different yet accurate portrayal of the characters, and, of course, a healthy dose of Raveast. ♥
My new favorite line of all time is officially "Your eyes...they're luminous yet dark pools of grape soda."
CalliopeMused, you just got a new fan. |
 purplerave 2008-04-05 . chapter 5I'm not quite sure what happened at the end, but still this was great!! I loved it. I kinda wish the sequal was longer, but it's your story and it ended up doing just fine, in my opinion. Can't wait to read some more of your stuff!
~PR |
 suzako 2007-10-14 . chapter 5Ah, love this story! I've never seen the characters so IC before! BBRae! RobStar! CyJinx! All my favourite pairings!! It's so sad it has ended, but I am glad you wrote it^_^ |
 wandering_warrior 2007-09-02 . chapter 5 UPDATE! PLEASE UPDATE! |
 VeelaChic 2007-06-14 . chapter 5Very very very very very very very SUPERB! But wait, they never caught Deathstroke, atleast...I dont think they did. Very good however =] |
 BLIvorySS 2007-04-25 . chapter 5Hurrah!! What a great ending, so happy and...yeah, I love when everything works out:D. I really liked that Raven took them all to meet her emotions, it worked as a way to show that she's becoming closer to the team.
Anyways, a wonderful ending to a wonderful story!
-Liss |
 BLIvorySS 2007-04-25 . chapter 4Amazing chapter! I really enjoyed how Logan talked down demonic Raven, it was really well written and tense. Great job, as usual!
-Liss |
 random girl 2007-04-24 . chapter 5 A thoroughly enjoyable story. Your writing style was engaging and your characters well rounded. My only complaint is that you seemed to have dropped a few plot points from the first part of the story to the second, but nothing majorly important. I hope you do write another story within this universe, becuase I think it has a lot of potential left. |
 BLIvorySS 2007-04-22 . chapter 3Wow, sorry it's been so long for me since I got around to reviewing this chapter! Midterms kind of took me out of action for a while:D. Anyways, really awesome chapter, loved the mysterious undertones throughout. I'm very intrigued as to what it is Raven is hiding.
Well, guess I'll have to read on to find out...
-Liss |
 Lambbaby 2007-03-27 . chapter 5I was eating ice cream while enjoying this lovely fluffy cotton candy chapter. My dentist is going to be so happy.
So Jinx and Cy got thier date!How cute.I love it. The whole scene was totally in character with the two of them but still sweet and fluffy.
And Tim should know by now,Star knows him like the back of her hand. She knows what he's thinking, especially if it involves her lips meeting his.
I love,love,love Logan's last line. Such a Logan line. Although I think Raven found a good way to keep him quiet. Just kiss him when he's least expecting it. Gotta say Affection's kiss was quite interesting. Especially since she did it in front of everyone.
I doubt you could've found a better way to send these Titans off.This was absolutely perfect.And tell Kay that her scene was just right. |
 dr.evil99 2007-03-26 . chapter 5Let me now lend my voice to the chorus crying out for a sequal.
Raven's come a long way, introducing the team to her various 'aspects.' This is a very private person, and her doing this is a big step towards opening up to her friends. And she didn't even freak out when Affection decided to take a certain degree of initiative. Be proud of her, and kudos to the writer - it would be easy for such change to be forced and OOC, but as always, you've paced it all very well.
And as for another of our favorite couples... I like the playfulness, but I am glad that Cy decided to step things up, and be direct. Sure, she's a semi-villan, but there's a very sweet girl there, underneath all the mischief. The logical brain can rationalize it as trying to help her find the right path, or whatever. The fact is, she's a fun girl, and he likes her. If there is a continuation of this, I'd certainly like to see Jinx herself featured more, as her appearances here were highlights.
You told me about the last scene, and you were absolutely right. I was very happy. Nice that Logan managed to make all of the little Ravens happy, even Rage (hey, just because she's mad most times doesn't mean she can't like a little smooching, too.) Raven's got a good guy to show her all the things she hasn't done before, and he's got the stabilizing influence he needed. Definitely a match made in shipper heaven.
Sweet? You betcha, but this is worth brushing my teeth a few extra times for. Thank you for another wonderful story. |
 RaeFoxOni 2007-03-23 . chapter 5*gasp* *squee* Yay! ... and NO! ... You should definitely continue! You SHOULD! ... ... Please? *puppy-dog look* Puh-lease give in to me, a.k.a. the one who has no life outside of Fanfic! Don't leave me! |
 AyamiYeli 2007-03-23 . chapter 5this is so asowme!and what do you mean the end is it over? |
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