This reminds RobbieRabbit of Meet Joe Black. Except Axel's Lucifer... not death X3

Wonderful personality you've given him! Roxas as well. Surely there must be more to this. RobbieRabbit would LOVE to read more.

well it certainly is interesting... kudos to you for all the references.

Wow this just gave me a completely different vision towards ice cubes lol, they are in fact a great invention :p
lol I really don't know what to say (I bet no one noticed, right?)
Are you going to continue this? .. it's really good!

Hot damn. That's all I have to say.

I seriously hope you continue this story, it sounds great XD

Question:

Are you going to finish this?

*intrigued stare*

- GN

wow Very nice!
Being Lucifer is so very Axel XD
I'm looking forward the next chapter :'D

omigosh yayz this is awesome

please update soon

hey hey have you abandoned this story? its very interesting so far.

as axel puts it, "Bring.It.On." XD

Is it over? That was really good, so I would say you should continue. But if the inspiration is gone then it's gone, and judging from how long ago your last update was, I'd say it's gone. Oh well, I'll alert it just in case. Please update.

I've never read a story about Axel being the devil. XD He's always a demon or something like that. Great job on this chapter!

Lovely! Woow... Wow. I'd love to read more...

ya i LIKE it, but i would really like to find out more. UPDATE

I loved it! The idea of Axel as the Devil is fabulous, and so is his narration.

I hope you put more up.

Mara