This was pretty good, I admit. But some of your grammar and spelling is a bit off. Keep up the work though, you're doing great.

-- Kate B.M

'Dad made me a mew so I could help the aliens to take over the Earth…' So it wasn't Ryou-teme this time?

For some reason at the last paragraph I suddenly started hearing the 'Jaws' theme song playing in my head.

Aww, JD is so sweet!

Ahh, you write battle scenes well. *happy*

'Take a good, hard look at Mint... All she does is sit there and drink cups of tea!! Now that's what I'd call laziness!!' Oh, how very true...

JD's job is cool. I'd like to be a reporter someday.

Amaya's mum makes me laugh. :]

Man, they must have really been tuckered out to sleep for so long!

Amaya was putting "the moves" on poor JD. XDD

Poor guy, he was so confused. *giggles*

(So for not reviewing eariler, I'm a bit of a procrastinator...)

Aw, poor Amaya. TToTT

But still, really good story, dude!

Awesome!

Poor JD XD

Hey JD! This was a great chapter, I really liked how JD was willing to give up the article. I would've pulled it out longer and probably left a cliffie, but I'm different! :D It's still really great. Please continue!

AH! Pixie sticks. lol I had one at school and was all hyperish. Anyway... I really like it! I just had a few questions- what animals are Ayama and Mitzuki?

I love this chapter! YAY! more more more!

This was great! Please update. I'll update if you update. Haha! :D

w00t! After much nagging from kayla, im finally here and reviewing! lol! MAn sumtyms she doesnt know how to shut up! lol!!

Anyways awesome update!! Totally luvink this story! Its the best!! ^^

Updatez soonz plz!!

>Taking a deep breath she slowly leaned in, her face only a centimetre from his face<

Yes... yes!!

>when she was suddenly pulled back.<

Aw, damn.

>She was dragon slash liger.<

BWAHAHAHA!! I'm sorry if that's not supposed to be funny, but I was watching Napoleon Dynamite the other day. Please update!

>Am I falling for JD…<

You better be, Amaya! Kwel ,kwel, kwel!

Amaya is moving in a bit too fast. Poor JD!! If I were in that kind of situation (I'm a girl so, the other person would be a guy) I'd storm out of there. Thinking that the guy is a pervert. Then we'd slowly fall in love. I like the story so far. It's a lot better than my first fanfic!