you killed him! ;.;! You killed Xelloss! wonderful writng but still! You had me though. i was really into it. I was wondering, there for a while, if thoughs two would die or he would. Cool.

Nazo

i liked that it was very good u should make more but please if u make a nother one dont let zelgadis die because i love zel-chan

So sad but certainly a good fic _

I actually came across this fic often and thought, "No, doesn't sound like much", but this time I couldn't resist reading and I don't regret it! Except for the huge amount of exclamation marks, you've got a great writing style.

And it was really gripping, especially Zel's death. It was a must-read-to-the-end, really!

Know what stikes me? We mad fangirls always make our favorite charas suffer the most... we're all mazoku! No, really, it was great! I must say, I like this one much, much better than your other one I just read. This is really amazing, still, I wish you woulda left Zel and klutz-girl alive... Anyway!

*quietly blows nose* *doesn't quite know how to react, but grabs another tissue... just in case* Emotion-evoking. It was beautifully written, intense and detailed. Extremely sad, though, considering... well, duh. -.-; But, alas, despite it being a deathfic, your descriptive words leave the story more to the imagination than to the computer screen - the perfect way to write a story! _ Keep it up!

so sad! me wanna sequel... wait wouldn't be much of one wouldit? i love that story! oooooooo so great!

I hope Lina and Gourry can live on after that night... that kind of loss can screw up a person's soul...

i like it. u should add to it though. it was good.

*is nearly crying* that's so..so..so sad! poor lina, gourry, amelia, zelgadis and esspicialy xellos for the loss of zellas. very well written *bawls* ;_;