 PurpleButterfly4 2009-11-15 . chapter 34OH, COME ON! THIS STORY IS WAY TOO GOOD TO STOP NOW! Please update soon!! (IT'S KILLING ME!) |
 PurpleButterfly4 2009-11-14 . chapter 30Oh, my God! I think this story would be a whole lot better than it already is (which is 120% by the way!!) if Gaara loses control more often!! I loved this and chapter 29 to death!! |
 PurpleButterfly4 2009-11-13 . chapter 21I KNOW! GAARA'S EYE COLOR DRIVES ME CRAZY TOO!!
My God, I mean, come on!
It's ridiculous! Nobody can ever seem to find the official color of his eyes! But I always see his eyes as green. I can never see them as blue.. it's wierd O.O |
 gAara.cRazy 2009-11-10 . chapter 34 Firstly, this is possibly one of THE best GaaSaku fics I have EVER read. I love love LOVE it! Especially how you portray Gaara's character. Most people will try to ignore the fact that he's a murderer first and foremost, so I like the fact that you haven't only identified this, but have acted on it and expanded on it. Beautiful writing style.
The only thing that slightly annoys me is that the story can seem bipolar at times. One chapter Sakura understands Gaara and wants to help him, and the next he's a cold-blooded murderer that she despises, and as such erases all the previous progress.
Update soon! |
 Only if you wish it. 2009-10-31 . chapter 34Go Gaara-kun! Boo Sasuke! :) I LOVE YOUR STORY! It's so well written and...well, utterly AWESOME! And you keep Gaara so in character; you really have a talent at writing. I canNOT wait until your next update! GaaraXSakura! Woo! |
 PurpleButterfly4 2009-10-25 . chapter 1Simply genious! It's beautiful...
what a tear-jerker! |
 sappdownunder 2009-09-14 . chapter 34 =) i loved it continue!1! |
 Bitter-Sweet-ish 2009-08-31 . chapter 27Oh My God!! SOO GOOD! Lol, I'm craving these chapters... |
 A Person 2009-08-30 . chapter 34 I absolutely love this fanfic! You really seem to get into the characters' minds and you're so good with the descriptions and everything. This has definitely been one of my favorite fanfictions ever. Please update soon? |
 Lights Romance 2009-08-28 . chapter 28Snuggled, snuggled, snuggled. Lol it IS kind of funny :] |
 Lights Romance 2009-08-28 . chapter 13First three paragraphs are really descriptive & beautiful =] Especially when you described the sunset. |
 Lights Romance 2009-08-28 . chapter 10By killing others he feels the only touch he can? That's something I never thought of before! I'm amazed by how well you write. It's so interesting. =D |
 Lights Romance 2009-08-28 . chapter 1Just read the first chapter.
You wrote Sakura's part really beautifully. Great job. |
 Annabelinda Tsuki 2009-08-26 . chapter 34Your style changed, it began to take on a more thoughtful style that goes WAY too into thoughts, whereas your light-novel style shows what is needed. You truly didn't need so many of the words you put into Gaara and Sakura's thoughts up here, I ended up skimming through, for they really are tedious to read.
This is an amazing story, and I don't know how I could be so foolish. I thought I had clicked on a complete story, for I really really hate waiting for updates, but alas, at chapter 34, I discover this story is only the beginning. I remember you saying something about a sequel, which would take place after a time-skip? Personally, I think it is a brilliant idea, and I would read it with as much hunger as I read this one.
You know how to capture the reader ever so easily into your web of words, ensnaring us until we can't leave. This story made my heart beat fast and my breath quicken, sending chills down my body during certain parts. I truly didn't want to stop reading, but I also dreaded the end of the story, which would mean it is over, or I would have to wait for more, which is a hard thing to do. Not being able to read this story will feel like Gaara deprived of Sakura's touch.
The plot was amazing, and perfectionately brilliant! You knew where you were going and how to get there, and it shows with how you connected what where, ever so perfectly. The characters you had down perfectly, from their actions to their dialogue to their thinking, the thoughts streaming through their heads sounded just like them.
Everything about this story was brilliant, and it gets the reaction from the reader that many authors dream of elliciting, something you have succeded at. Every one of the reviews for this story are well disserved and well placed, including every one you have recieved from me and the ones you will recieve in the furure.
I do hope your busy schedule will give you some respite at one point so you will be able to finish this story. To see all the hard-work you have put into it go to waste will be a crushing defeat for us all. |
 Annabelinda Tsuki 2009-08-25 . chapter 30You know, you really don't have to explain anything, it is all pretty self-explanatory. You write your thought processes so well, it doesn't exactly leave the reader with any questions, but pure understanding. And, it doesn't rain in Suna, according to several different things, plus, with its placement on the map, it not having rain makes perfect sense, plus this is manga and fan-fiction. And, it would have only had to not rain for eleven years, because nobody remembers what happens to them before they turn three.
:) Anybody ever mentioned you write like a light-novel writer? |
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