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gAara.cRazy
2009-11-10 . chapter 34
Firstly, this is possibly one of THE best GaaSaku fics I have EVER read. I love love LOVE it! Especially how you portray Gaara's character. Most people will try to ignore the fact that he's a murderer first and foremost, so I like the fact that you haven't only identified this, but have acted on it and expanded on it. Beautiful writing style.

The only thing that slightly annoys me is that the story can seem bipolar at times. One chapter Sakura understands Gaara and wants to help him, and the next he's a cold-blooded murderer that she despises, and as such erases all the previous progress.

Update soon!
Only if you wish it.
2009-10-31 . chapter 34
Go Gaara-kun! Boo Sasuke! :) I LOVE YOUR STORY! It's so well written and...well, utterly AWESOME! And you keep Gaara so in character; you really have a talent at writing. I canNOT wait until your next update! GaaraXSakura! Woo!
PurpleButterfly4
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Simply genious! It's beautiful...
what a tear-jerker!
sappdownunder
2009-09-14 . chapter 34
=) i loved it continue!1!
Bitter-Sweet-ish
2009-08-31 . chapter 27
Oh My God!! SOO GOOD! Lol, I'm craving these chapters...
A Person
2009-08-30 . chapter 34
I absolutely love this fanfic! You really seem to get into the characters' minds and you're so good with the descriptions and everything. This has definitely been one of my favorite fanfictions ever. Please update soon?
xoxoklim
2009-08-28 . chapter 28
Snuggled, snuggled, snuggled. Lol it IS kind of funny :]
xoxoklim
2009-08-28 . chapter 13
First three paragraphs are really descriptive & beautiful =] Especially when you described the sunset.
xoxoklim
2009-08-28 . chapter 10
By killing others he feels the only touch he can? That's something I never thought of before! I'm amazed by how well you write. It's so interesting. =D
xoxoklim
2009-08-28 . chapter 1
Just read the first chapter.
You wrote Sakura's part really beautifully. Great job.
Annabelinda
2009-08-26 . chapter 34
Your style changed, it began to take on a more thoughtful style that goes WAY too into thoughts, whereas your light-novel style shows what is needed. You truly didn't need so many of the words you put into Gaara and Sakura's thoughts up here, I ended up skimming through, for they really are tedious to read.

This is an amazing story, and I don't know how I could be so foolish. I thought I had clicked on a complete story, for I really really hate waiting for updates, but alas, at chapter 34, I discover this story is only the beginning. I remember you saying something about a sequel, which would take place after a time-skip? Personally, I think it is a brilliant idea, and I would read it with as much hunger as I read this one.

You know how to capture the reader ever so easily into your web of words, ensnaring us until we can't leave. This story made my heart beat fast and my breath quicken, sending chills down my body during certain parts. I truly didn't want to stop reading, but I also dreaded the end of the story, which would mean it is over, or I would have to wait for more, which is a hard thing to do. Not being able to read this story will feel like Gaara deprived of Sakura's touch.

The plot was amazing, and perfectionately brilliant! You knew where you were going and how to get there, and it shows with how you connected what where, ever so perfectly. The characters you had down perfectly, from their actions to their dialogue to their thinking, the thoughts streaming through their heads sounded just like them.

Everything about this story was brilliant, and it gets the reaction from the reader that many authors dream of elliciting, something you have succeded at. Every one of the reviews for this story are well disserved and well placed, including every one you have recieved from me and the ones you will recieve in the furure.

I do hope your busy schedule will give you some respite at one point so you will be able to finish this story. To see all the hard-work you have put into it go to waste will be a crushing defeat for us all.
Annabelinda
2009-08-25 . chapter 30
You know, you really don't have to explain anything, it is all pretty self-explanatory. You write your thought processes so well, it doesn't exactly leave the reader with any questions, but pure understanding. And, it doesn't rain in Suna, according to several different things, plus, with its placement on the map, it not having rain makes perfect sense, plus this is manga and fan-fiction. And, it would have only had to not rain for eleven years, because nobody remembers what happens to them before they turn three.

:) Anybody ever mentioned you write like a light-novel writer?
Annabelinda
2009-08-25 . chapter 21
Still having problems with Gaara's eye color? In my experiance, people keep describing Gaara's and Sakura's wrong, whereas they say Sakura has the sea-green eyes and Gaara is jade, it is truly the other way around, where Sakura's eyes are a shiny emerald green and Gaara's green eyes are light and can easily be mistaken for blue, but it is like a foamy sea green, or what the sky would look like if it were green.

And you are right, Shukaku Love is an amazing fan-fiction, I have read it before and fell in love with it, my only wish is that it could be completed. It would be worth a reread...
Annabelinda
2009-08-25 . chapter 10
Your death to love explanation was truly amazing, brilliant even, only something a person who really thought it through could write, and it made the most perfect sense. And the way you went from logical sentence to sentence just smoothed over so perfectly, it truly was amazing, purely mesmerizing to read.
Annabelinda
2009-08-25 . chapter 9
I have always loved stories done in this style, a style I can't seem to achieve for my own writing, it is such a joy to read, truly it is, it takes you into such depths of the characters, showing you their very being inside, and let me tell you something, you are good at it, very good.

And Gaara's not OOC in this chapter, not at all. Seems just like him, actually, they way he reacted with Sakura.
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