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| super-rat 2008-05-07 ch 31, | abuseBWAHHAHAHAHAHA! YES! Shukaku has made contact! HAHAHAHAHA! could you try and add in some ShuInSaku (Shukaku X Inner Sakura) moments? if possible? |
| super-rat 2008-05-07 ch 28, | abuseaww...YAY! |
| super-rat 2008-05-07 ch 24, | abuseswet...:D |
| super-rat 2008-05-07 ch 23, | abuseaww...GaaSaku fluff! XD |
| super-rat 2008-05-06 ch 10, | abuseGO SAKURA! :D |
| super-rat 2008-05-06 ch 9, | abuseyay! cool! |
| super-rat 2008-05-06 ch 7, | abuseuh-oh...Shukaku's mad... |
| super-rat 2008-05-06 ch 5, | abuseYay...although i like a more...perverted Shukaku, this style's good! YEAH! :D |
| super-rat 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseYAY! Inner Sakura made an appearence! :D |
| Neko4 2008-04-25 ch 31, | abuseWAT GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT |
| LarkasBlessing122291 2008-04-25 ch 31, | abuseHi.. erm I just wanted to say that i'm a long time reader.. just uh never reviewed but now I'm getting into the habit so... Great Fic! It was actually the first gaasaku I've ever came across and I've been hooked ever since ^_^ so good job and can't wait till your next update :3 ~Larka |
| OrangeAce 2008-04-24 ch 31, | abusethis is one heck of a GaaSaku! the sweetest ever! man! gaara was so addicted to hugs and it was cute! =] I love your story! I know that you won't be able to read this... because of what happened. i'm sorry for what happened... I hope you overcome this problem soon ^^ I'll pray for you! and... i'll continue waiting for you to update on this =] YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER! how you managed to align everything was so AWESOME! XD thanks for writing this... |
| AvariceWrath 2008-04-23 ch 31, | abuseHiya. Just had to tell you that I LOVE this story. I started it around 5 yesterday and finished reading it well past midnight. I got scolded for that, hehe. Of all the fanfictions I've read with Gaara in it, you developed his character the best. Your character of him is perfect, esp. the way you describe his thoughts and his past. And you don't have him randomly go off and do something that isn't him. You kind of had one wierd Gaara moment in chapter 9, but it was so beautifully described in chapter 10. I love how deep into Gaara you get esp. in chapter 10 and how you described the whole touch = love thing. It was amazing I sat and pondered it for quite a while. You are an amazing writer, at least I think you are. Oh and you asked at one point if it would be better to add more characters views on the story. Well I think that it would help in certain situations esp. with the siblings points of views. Then again it could also just make things more complicated if you get too many characters thoughts out there. You could probably pull it off, but I like it with just Gaara's and Sakura's thoguhts. I really like the Shukaku and Inner Sakura mind switch thingy. Most people just have them switch randomly without a connections between them. But you do it quite well with the whole Sakura touched the gourd when she was trying to calm Gaara down and thus touched Shukaku as well, and then you connected it further with the sand. It was brilliant. Anywho, I just wanted to tell you that it's an amazing story. I really do like it. How long did it take you to come up with the whole Gaara touch = love theory? Cause it's really cool. Oh and I love the deal that Gaara and Sakura make in the last chapter. . . makes me kind of wonder who is going to benifit from it more. |
| Dark lady 2008-04-13 ch 31, anon. | abuseThe Shukaku/Inner Sakura thing was pure genius! I cannot wait to see where you will take this next. |
| Lady Night Wind 2008-04-13 ch 31, | abuseWhy in the heck would your parents do such a cruel thing?! *Glowers at the thought* Hm... I think I will make sure to have a full copy of your story so far saved in word, just in case your parents figure out how to remove it. If needed you then could contact me for the copy. This is rather novel of me to make such an offer, but since I truly adore your story it would distress me to know that such enjoyable art could disappear without a trace. Oh I hope that you do not make me wait a year-and-a-half for the next update of this amazing story, but what will be will be. Parents can be a hassle at times. |