Hmm, this was pretty good. The ending was twistedly funny :D

That's a sadistically funny ending.

Aw, I LOVE it. And I'm so glad you love this pairing now- I just can't believe the amazing nature of Them, and how long it took for me to be obsessed with her. And him.

I love how you put in my quotations; such a violent manner. I loved him almost pushing her off the balcony, of course. It was really great, and then of course, the option he picked instead.

I also adore how different we feel about these characters. I like your reassignment of traditional roles- with her owning him, while I tend to make them either 'unofficial' or with him in charge... I just like thinking about them in different ways.

and now I wrote a book!