Reviews for Star Wars KOTOR II: The Final Waltz

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Darth Red 2007-08-15 ch 8,	abuseNice to see another Chapter after the long delay...I actually began to think you had scrapped it. Anyways, still lots of dialogue...I think we'd all like to see some 'actual action' soon, Darth Red.
Darth Red 2007-06-10 ch 7,	abuseA tad bit long, too long I think but not every chapter can be action packed and I understand (as I recently completed my story) that some chapters like this are needed to flesh out the overall plot of the story. Actually several sections in this chapter reminded me of mine quite a bit...anyways, still good going, I'm thinking of starting to write my depiction of Kotor...I'm not quite sure though as my vision of Kotor is far different than what we all know and love...Darth Red.
Darth Red 2007-04-28 ch 6,	abuseLoved the speeder chase but (correct me if I'm wrong) doesn't Nar Shaddaa have no authorities governing their planet? I thought the Hutts and Exchange ran it all...either way a nice follow-up, hopefully the story will shift off-planet now...as always nice job, Darth Red. p.s. just curious, are you still reading my story? how far along are you and what do you think of it...?
Darth Red 2007-03-25 ch 5,	abuseExcellent as always...but allow me to add a slight criticism, I understand that you are building up the story but I think your characters (and most of the overall story) has been on the Smugglers Moon long enough. If I were you I'd kick things into gear with the next chapter and 'get things moving' (plotwise that is), or at least give your readers a small taste of the harrowing events to come...but if you need to stay on Nar Shaddaa for the next several chapters may I suggest focusing more on Rena, Deus, and the Sith where they are...bottom line so far- the stories been good...good, not great...I'm sure it'll pick up though ;)
RunningStorm 2007-03-23 ch 5,	abusei love your KOTOR stories, they are written SO well! Dante is a very...interesting character, and in an odd way, he reminds me of Luke. I don't know why, and that's just my opinion of him. And the way he uses the Force and influences things around him is also quite interesting. Again, just talking of what i see in your character. RunningStorm
RunningStorm 2007-03-09 ch 4,	abuse0.0 NO! YOU. KILLED. VISAS?! BUT SHE WAS KICK **! I loved her as a character, second only to Mira! CONTINUE! PLEASE CONTINUE!
RunningStorm 2007-03-09 ch 3,	abusenow remind me, are Revan and the Exile canon? Male Revan, female Exile? Just wondering.
RunningStorm 2007-03-09 ch 2,	abusewow...so much good writing! I love your KOTOR fics! They rock my socks!!
RunningStorm 2007-03-09 ch 1,	abuseOMG! I loved this prolouge! Your skill is flawless! I wish i could write like you!
Darth Red 2007-03-09 ch 4,	abuseSo Visas has fallen...I'm sure that will be the cherry on top of Dantes ** sundae right now...lol. But as always a great follow up, hopefully the updates won't be as long...and I see that you have another reviewer 'the newbie Jorin'...he reviewed mine as well. He seems knowledgable...knows what he wants out of a story, he'll love your writing style and story I'm sure...I'll be waiting in the wings as always for the next chapter, Darth Red.
Jord 2007-03-08 ch 4,	abuseYour baddies are wonderful. It's true! Your building up momentum beautifully in this chapter, and you've done in with a grace that doesn't rush things. The way you further emphasized Dante's need to be at Rena's side again played across well. Especially the instance where he asks no one in particular where she is. It's a common phrase used in similar situations, but it works well here because of the hopelessness of the words. And because us readers have the privilege of seeing both Rena and Dante, working their way to meet again. A job well done.
Jord 2007-02-16 ch 3,	abuseI apologize for the delay in reviewing! This is turning out to be a wonderful beginning, and I can't wait to sink my teeth into the meat of this story. (A gory description, but hey.) What I find annoying is that not many people have reviewed your story! It seems that stories filled with more dialogue, fewer descriptions and substance, get lauded so much more. But I honestly do believe they're missing out on something here. Good job - and the time and effort you put into this is much appreciated.
Darth Red 2007-02-05 ch 3,	abuseWell as you can no doubt tell I'm back...broke my wrist in basic so I'm here for a while. Anyways doing great as always with your writing, I look forward to the next chapter to see more Dante...it's early but I can already feel the story building, I like it so far...Darth Red. p.s. If you get a chance go check out my finished story 'The Story of forgotten Jedi Owen Sun'...I'd like to hear what you think about the ending.
Trillian4210 2007-01-29 ch 1,	abuseI haven't read "Catharsis" solely for the lack of time. Your writing is so good, I lament not being able to really (not yet anway) devote the time to really digest your epic fics. (I have to suffice on the one-shots) ;) But I gave this a read anyway, not really knowing what was happening, and found myself engaged anyway. Your duels are superbly done and the way you mix angst and character development in with them is just awesome. Excellent work. :)
Darth Red 2007-01-18 ch 2,	abuseWell it's nice to finally see the sequel to 'Catharsis' up...kinda bad timing though as I leave for basic training on Saturday the 20th. Yeah that's right if you've read my profile you know I've joined the Canadian Armed Force- Infantry and I leave for basic in just a few days...I'll try to get back and read the rest but no promises, sorry...and who knows things may not work out, there's no guarantee that I'm in until I complete basic which is very tough to say the least. Anyways sorry to keep pradling on, this is a review board not a message board...good start I think, building up everything as you are. Going a little overkill on the description for everything though...I think all Star Wars fans get what Nar Shaddaa is all about and what it looks like, so for the future...just keep it a little simpler, it'll save you a lotta time. Just a suggestion, Darth Red...p.s. hope to see an update before I leave, if not it's been nice knowing ya...

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