Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Elegantly written, everyone's in character, and it really touched me, especially that chapter about Neville.

Well done.

so sad. i almost cried in nevilles one.

aw poor Ron and Sirius...even though you told me when you started this that Ron was dead...poor Ronnie!! Nice ending though, everyone loves a nice bit of bitterness! lol.
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Kelci! You obviously had our lit exam on the brain when you wrote this...oh Kelci...oh my Kelci! lol! but yeah, v sweet, and I couldn't help but role my eyes when you turned it romantic, I figured it would be Snape! o you and your Slytheriness!! x

aw Neville :'( you said there was atwist but I didn't expect that! fabby as always, aww Neville

aw that was sweet! poor Lupin :( fabby as usual becci!

very sweet. poor Fred! brill as usual though Becci!

yay shooting flies! *shoots fly with her sonic screwdriver* works with them too, well kinda frazzles them but kills them nonetheless. (comes back to reality) well yeah another fabby chapter! grins evilly knowing what happens in the end!! ah the benefits of being kelci! n I'm absolutely appalled that only I've reviewed so far! come on guys! review the fabulousness that is Becci's fic!

o very good becci! very emotive (I've just noticed the word emotive has the word emo in it!) I remember you telling me about this, and it's fabulous I have decided! x