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Marelli 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abuseVery very well written. This story was short and sweet, perfect length. It wasn't exactly what I had expected from the summary, but in a good way-it was better. The thing that struck me the most was how in character everyone was. Shikamaru, in my opinion, would have done exactly as you described. Though it was never mentioned that she was Ino, I loved the little quirps of what she would say if he had done something that he was thinking of. I wasn't expecting it to be Naruto, however. I liked how you kept him from last. I also really appriciated how you didn't include Sasuke. Really, I'm serious. Some people do that in their oneshots and that leaves the reader to question exactly when the story was set and how he got there. So, nice attention to detail. Also, I must say, I didn't notice any ShikaxNeji. Maybe I just don't have a good yaoi detecter... All in all, lovely oneshot. And sorry this review is so long...I got carried away~Marelli
fanficismything 2008-02-07 ch 1,	abuseXD I like it. It's cuteXD
slack-jawed cheese hugger 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseif only he was nothing but himself perhaps he could act as such. but, seeing as that is not so, he is constrained by the edges of his friends seeping into his edges weaving through his soul, chaining him into feigned indifference... (i'm glad you liked the other one! is it all right if i write poems for some of your other stories as well? i love writing freeverse, and these fanfictions are so emotional that unless i write it down, i'll surely explode... [currently listening to Zelda 64: Hyrule Party Mix by NoppZ, from it fits it somehow...] thanks again for this release.)
Kittinz 2007-01-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo sweet! i love it! ^^
kosumi 2007-01-18 ch 1,	abuseAMAZING Story. For some reason this story doesn't seem as short as it looks. I was surprised all the way through. As I was reading about all the boys... I kept thinking... HES the one that marries her. I totally wasn't expecting Naruto. Amazingly written. A very sad one-sides ShikaINo. STUPID SHIKA... I wish he could have gotten his feelings known. anyways... you did an awesome job on this. It was a delightful read.
StEpPiNg StOnEs 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abusethat was very well written, honestly. I'm not a huge fan of ShikaxIno, but it's better than ShikaTema. I liked the idea of this story, as well. Shikamaru thought if he was...that was cool. anyway! yeah, I relaly liked this :)
asn water 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abusewow... that was good. i was waiting for him to talk about naruto and when i noticed that there was nothing under his naruto if i was completely surprised. i thought it would be sasuke for some reason. i dont know why. anyways wow i've never read a story like this before. good job.
Malak Akane 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuseOh my, this was very good! Sad, in a strange way, because the whole time you're wanting Shikamaru to do SOMETHING, but he won't. Yet, you portrayed his character really well. He did exactly what he would have done: nothing. It's too troublesome. But I like how you told the story. In a vague sense, where the reader doesn't know exactly what's going down until the very end. I mean, I knew it was a wedding, but I didn't realize who was marrying Ino until the very end. Anyways, Brava, magnificent! I love your writing style so much! I don't suppose there's a chance you'll ever write a longer story, hmm? -pleads- ~Kodu
Adiji-Sensei 2007-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThat was great!

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