I need to infect you with a write-a-holic virus... I'd like to know what happens next.

i'm kind of confused
but update mkay?

That was adorable I can't wait to see how you end it... go on with it... I really do hope you go on with this, I love how the characters are portrayed! This is a wonderful story and I love you're writing style... Please continue, I can't wait to read more of it.

Not much to say what you can do better. Another awesome fic. ;) I don't like the past tense better though^^
Yay for angst and choking, I could see this happen (before Day of Black Sun though) xD Very interesting and exciting situation Sokka and Zuko are in^^ Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update ;)

Why do you torture me so? I love this fic! I hope you will eventually continue it. It's def worth it!

Please update please do its so good. Totally wanna see what happens next!
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Great beginning. Pity that the story seems to be dead... I would really like to read how the two of them come to some sort of understanding.

Hey,
I liked your first two chapters. I know you updated this fanfic January of this year, but do you think you will update ever or is this it? Thanks, JJ.

Why are you so good at writing fanfiction! Once again you amuse me with you wonderful writing.

Oh, just to say, If Zuko's rib where broken, It would be very painful for him to breath, expecially if he was laying on his sdie. Just thought I'd mention that.

I like this story!
Poor Zuko, the way everyone's been treating him is very cruel. But I can already see the first signs of Sokka's interest in him. I like a lot the way you're making them interact. It's very realistic. They're not just "suddenly and magically falling in love". Everyone's in character and your description is really good. I hope you update soon, I'll be looking forward to it!

this is really good so far! i like how you had azula telling sokka all that stuff about zuko to humiliate him. it's a clever way to i guess breach the gap and hate and stuff between them, you know? at least i hope that's what you intended it to do... :P

can't wait for the next chapter!!

Ooh, very good job on this. I like it a lot so far...it's definitely a believable way for them to meet and actually start talking, or something like it.

this is so good! I totally need to watch it.. are you going to finish? pleeases do! please, please!! you're an amazing writer and i'm so hooked.

I'm really enjoying this so far. Any chance we'll see more?

Excellent so far =] keep it up *favs*