AH! This was so good! I really like your style of writing and I think you should write a sequel to this, I know it was not planned; but I would enjoy it.
Best of wishes..
-alairia

Very good story, especially since it's your first finished one (you should see my first attempt, a total scare). Although the first chapter has an uneasy rhythm, the next two are well done. Also, the way you insert funny sentences here and there, make the whole story easy to read. Keep it up.
Cheers,
Ocaso.

Wow. That was great!

I too love everything British. The accent the most, but afterwards Jane Austen and HP. :) I wrote some HP stories but not Jane Austen yet. I loved your drama: I love dramatic stories. Great job!

AW! This was so amazingly sweet!

YES PLEASE KEEPS THE STORIES COMMING!

er... what exactly IS the twist...

Whats the twist?
well anyhow i like it still

I like the story and how Wickham was knocked out a couple times..he deserved it! What did Lizzie and Darcy name their daughter and what about Darcy's shoulder? is someone going to look at it?

tht's not the end is it? what's going to happen to wickham?is he going to get punished for trying to hurt lizzy and darcy? and what's the baby's name going to be?oh mrs bennett is so cute lol hahhahahaha even tho she has her little annoying moments.i think ur'v done a great job ov writing this fanfiction once i started reading i couldn't stop GREAT JOB!!

Cool. Typical Mrs Bennet, always wanting to know everything, yet not seeing the obvious. I hope Darcy's alright, and that Wickham is suitably punished.

hug.

so this is very dramatic...but makes it all the more fun!
LaLum

I am in love with this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon.

Oh! I wasn't expecting him to go for Elizabeth, but she'll be alright, won't she?

o thrilling, now i gtg ur story putin me off my romeo and juliet coursework

I always kind of disliked Wickham. :[ Don't tell me he's going to go for Elizabeth? That's low, even for him. =__=;

Nasty cliffhanger!! Update soon, please? :] Very nice beginning!!