aww, what a cute story! you're a great writer! and i love how you made the whole little kid thing work. no "grow-up-fifth-grader" would walk up to a kid and say, "Hi! I'm so-and-so! Let's be friends!" lol. it's just all so very adorable.

CUTE KAiORA♥
hahahaha, the part where a teacher suddenly said “You know you’re not supposed to leave your table" made me go LOLL.
xD;;
lol ending ! magicc x33
nice nice, & write more kaay? coz you own the dinosaurs ! xDD;

` MCHLV; < 3 felia.

Aww, cute kaiora!! That gave me memories. Although our cafeteria seats weren't comfortable. ^^' That was really nice, i liked the point of the story, and the way it was written.
*faves*
Airica

Cute!

ZAW I WUV THIS ONE TOO!

&& its so darn adorable! it
makes me want to hug sora! :)

this is really good because
it has a different approach
having the characters as little
kids. its very creative! job well
done...again!

[ loren ]

Aw, thats so cute! ^_^

:D

Oh! That was adorable. You made their characters so cute [especially with Sora] It seemed really realistic to childhood issues and it was so completely innocent and cute. I had the biggest smile on my face reading it.

"He wants to be friends but Roxas has just started an interesting conversation about a worm he found in his garden so Sora is torn in two."

Haha, that made me giggle. One of my favorite lines, just because it's so cute. xD

Awesome job. I loved it.