This is such a beautiful poem! I find it difficult to make poems rhyme and still sound good when spoken aloud, but you did it! I read this out loud, and it was like... whoa! I'm tearing up now... I really liked it!

Nice

I think this discribes all of what Zutara fans want or is that just me. It was cute. It was told in 3rd person insted of the normal Zuko specking than Katara type thing it was good very good. Keep on doing what you do in the poem.

that was terribly cute. made me tear up a bit...

Wow. You really are good at writing poems. And by the looks of it broadening your horizens is working out great. Good job!!

Awesome. Pure awesome. And supercute. Keep up the awesome work!

wow... that is good!really cute the opening hooks u in because you just dont know what is going to happen! fantastic!

Nice, Airgirl. I'll read some more of your writing a bit later. ":) Keep up the good work!

That was SO GOOD! Excellent poem, and beautiful besides! Yay!