cute. I love it

Oh, I really like this story! Very original, and nicely written.

I've always had a soft spot for a good fic where it focuses on Tatsuha and his troubles. I like to see how he copes with living his life when he is surrounded by so much drama, without being a part of them. You definitely managed to do a good job on this fic by bringing depth to this character. It's incredibly hard to find a well written fic with Tatsuha as a main character, and from this fic as well as 'End of Innocence', I really like your characterization of him. Thanks for the good read!

I'm not much of a Ryuichi + Tatsuha fan, in fact I prefer both of them with Shuichi, but I still thought this was an adorable fic, and it goes straight to my favorites for that reason ^^ I remember thinking, when I heard the name of Murakami's new Megamix (Capybara), that it was going to be Ryu + Tatsuha for the same zoo scene, but it ended up being Hiro x Suguru XD Who knew? Anyways, that's why I clicked on your story, 'cause I assumed it would be Hiro x Suguru. That's what I get for not reading summaries XP It was still an excellent fic, though, and I'm glad I didn't read the summary 'cause then I wouldn't have read it. xP I hope to read more by you soon!! ^^

yes! it was very cute, I loved the phone conversation between tats and tohma, as well as noriko at the end XD It felt good ^^

more ryu tats soon? o.o

This was a nicely done piece that did a good job of filling out that particular scene in the manga. I hope you keep writing more Gravi!