Good story— I liked it. :D

But, I'd advise a bit of work when it came to the Al Bhed. It through me off that I had to keep going back to the Al Bhed Translator to figure out what the characters said, it took away from the story. You could just say "From this point on, these people are speking in Al bhed:..." or something, so you can type it regularly or add what they are saying in parenthesis or something.

Other then that, I really did like it. Good job. :D

I enjoyed this. Thanks for encouraging me to read it.
U lomd pi e wcoird al bhed pa ryz.

Whoa drana'c y mud uv dnyhcmycreuhc oui fuimt uv druikrd E fuimt pa vmiahd eh al bhed yvdan drec lrybdan. (sa dnoehk du pa vihho)

kuehk famm cu vyn.

Aww, how cute!
Very good story, I really enjoyed it ;).

together at last...

Oh that was such a cute story! I loved the ending, congrats on finishing.

What a great ending. Looks like Rikku and Gippal are going to end up like Tidus and Yuna... now what about Paine? ;-)

Yeah!! An update!! I really liked this chapter. I don't remember them ever saying how Gippal got his eye patch. I liked your theory. Hope you update again soon!! :-)

Aw...I feel bad for Rikku and Gippal...their cute moment was interrupted by friends. Oh well. They did get some time alone in the end. As always, very cute. I loved it. There was a lot of dialogue, but that really wasn't a problem. You're pretty awesome, congratulations on finishing the story!

Might there actually be a YR Operation! PABTAL in the future? Hm? Well as long as you continue to write I'll be happy.

I'm so glad you didn't turn this into a lemon. It's much cuter that way, I think :D.
I love the whole protection element too, it really shows Gippal's soft side under all that cockiness he likes to show off. Overall a really cute chapter :D.
Oh one other thing, it's probably just a typo, but in the 4th section, 2nd sentence, it says "embaressed" instead of "embarassed". Just thought I'd give a heads up.

Aw! Kawai desune? Hai, totemo kawai! Rikku-chan wa sugoi sakka desuyo! Rikku-chan mo totemo kirei desu.

I'm being silly. Anyway, great chapter. very cute and I'm glad that they're together again. The eyepatch story was adorable and works really well. Great job. I'm excited to see how it ends. Keep writing, you rule.

AH!!
THIS IS SO CUTE!
I CANT WAIT FOR RIKKU AND GIPPAL TO GET TOGETHER!!
THEYRE MY FAVORITE COUPLE!!

Haha! I love this chapter, 'tis so amusing!
Paine and Yuna have such good matchmaking skills :).

Yea!! An update. This was a really good chapter! Can't wait to see what happens on the "search" for Paine. :-)

aya! U UPDATE! Awesome chappie I love how Rikku and Gippal overreacted on the whole Paine thingy tee hee great chappiE! HOPE TO SEE MORe...SOON! lol ^0^ UPDATE!