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| Miranda Quick 2007-09-17 ch 30, | abuseEep!! I'm so glad that I wasn't reading this when you were writing it. Lol. I would have died if I had to wait. I'm on my way over to read the last part! I can't wait to see! This is a wonderfully written story. I was sad to see the characters starting to die, but I guess it can't always be happy. :( Anyways keep up the great writing! |
| Just Lilo 2007-08-30 ch 30, | abuseYou're crazy. I don't know how you write this stuff. You should send it to the producers or writers for Heroes or something. You really need to make sure you become an author. |
| GothikStrawberry 2007-08-10 ch 30, | abuseOh my ... just when I started to forget about Linderman he shows up again. Also I can't believe Jenny actually has a tempting offer on the table ... but then again our heroes know that she'll sell them out in a heart beat if it suited her. (I love to hate that woman) A GREAT ending for a great story ... I can hardly wait for the next installment. :) |
| babyblue6666 2007-08-09 ch 30, | abuseOmg...took me three days to finish this story and the first installment to...it was soo good and i can not tell u how much im ichin in my seat for more. Im a mess now right before work and all because wat has happened to some charachters...but it makes the story more realistic in a way to show that now everyone lives...WELL DONE! |
| SkyRogue 2007-08-08 ch 30, | abuseOh no! It's finally over, and dang, that was a surprise! I can't wait for the sequel... it's gonna be so good! Think you could drop me a line when you post the first chapter? thanks -skyrogue |
| Revan Skywalker 2007-08-08 ch 30, anon. | abuseu better write the last story in this saga. it is awesome |
| The Sushi Monster 2007-08-08 ch 30, | abuseJenny is one interesting character... And you killed Ando. o.O Oh well. I loved Ando. And I'm looking forward to that sequel! |
| inspire16 2007-08-07 ch 30, | abuseholy frig! omg that was awesome! i knew it! i knew lindermann was still behind it, no matter what was happening. oh well can not wait for the third installment! you rock! inspire16 |
| SparkRocker 2007-08-07 ch 30, | abuseyou...you...i cant believe it...you just...OMG! That was amasing, great amazing cliff hanger and now im just going off to lick my wounds in the corner and whine for more of your stories. Do you have a name for the third? |
| SkyRogue 2007-07-31 ch 28, | abuseYAY! Micah's ok! Wow, it's an update! It's been a while, hasn't it? I hope the updates are going to be closer to each other now... Well, great chapter, can't wait for the next one! |
| trecebo 2007-07-30 ch 28, | abuseDude, Micah bringing down the choppers with his powers! Way cool! |
| GothikStrawberry 2007-07-28 ch 28, | abuseYAY for Micah! :) Though I suppose Jenny is not going to be so nice to him ... she really has gone off the deep end... no matter she makes a great villain. Looks like Sylar has some competition. And this sequel is just as gripping as 'Apocalypse' ... and I can't wait to find out what Matt and Claire have planned ... they have a plan, right? Though I am still wondering when Linderman will make an appearance seeing as he seems to be the one behind it all. But I'm sure he'll rare his head eventually. Anyway just wanted to let you know that you are doing a superb job. :) |
| SparkRocker 2007-07-27 ch 28, | abusefreaking hell...just read your entire story starting with apocalypse to here (i have no life) and im so blown away im going to have to do my hair again...loving your story and i can not wait for more... |
| angelcordyforever 2007-07-27 ch 28, | abuseso you know i really adore this story, and you can tell that by the fact that i stayed up all last nighteven though i had to be up at 600 this morning) reading this because it is that amazing. I have all very good reviews, there is only one thing i would change, and that would be to end the action and to see more paire action...hehe. I do love action but i think you have theperfect amount right now. I love how well you have portrayed Matts personality even though he wasn't a huge character on the show. I can't wait for more updates...so i am an update **?big deal lol.. |
| Elliesmeow 2007-07-26 ch 28, | abuseConcentrate on what? And when do we get to drop a house on Jenny? Gah, I hate that **! -Ellie |