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| Closer than far 2007-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I'm really depressed now. :( Great piece of writing, though. |
| demolished-soul 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. I'm trying not to cry here because I really can't imagine Calleigh being killed. Great job capturing the atmosphere and emotions of the characters. |
| Lilith 2007-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG, I can't believe you did it again! This brought tears to my eyes ever since the first few lines. Your descriptions are always so deep and well done... You're so gifted! Terrific job, Lunes, I love it. |
| KATHLEEN 2007-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseVERYY CUTE. I'D HAVE TO SAY. JUST ONE QUESTION. ISN'T ERIC SUPPOSE TO BE THE GROOMSMAN. AND ISN'T THE RING SUPPOSE TO BE ON HER LEFT HAND? |
| Shadowsakura321 2007-01-22 ch 1, | abuseOMG, THAT was GREAT and so sad. Amazing. U rock. I just signed up here and have always been a HUGE fan of yours. -Claps- |
| whitewolf1559 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWow. This was really good. Very sad, but very good. Well written. |
| Tails 2007-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse*Wipes tears away* Oh, say it aint so...*sob* That was beautiful. Poor Ryan...Yet another wonderful fic Sara Duquesne *applauds* Bravo! |
| StevieWolfe 2007-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLuna, you did it again! You have to stop killing my favourite characters! Of course, I'm joking, it was a wonderful piece, as usual...and really really sad! Go on like this! elisa |
| cinegirl 2007-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuse*cries* very, very sad, but so well written...the description of the team, Ryan's feelings, everything - wonderful, and absolutely filling my Angst ** Heart ;) |
| sandersidle 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseMy God that was beautiful. Man, it was so sad! you're really good at describing things. Like how you said she looked like a rose in the middle of the street. Aw. So sad but I so loved it. Awesome job, Luna! |
| fleeting.ideas 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abusethat was good. especially the last sentence very emotional. :] |
| Mad Lil' Me 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseI love it! But its so so sad. I do hope they never kill of Calleigh. The team would be lost without her. Especially Ryan. I am a firm supporter of CaRWash. |
| Still-RIP-Speed 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseOk, I don't ship for CaRwash AT ALL...but this story is so well written, its beautiful!the rawest of the emotion-really well written |
| Lizicia 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseAngst whores rule! The story is good and depressing and heart-breaking, all the way angsty. Of course, I'd like to see them happy but we all need some angst from time to time. By the way, I think it was your first (second?) CaRWash story, where you killed Calleigh. You usually do that to Ryan. |
| ObessedTWFan 2007-01-18 ch 1, | abuseI like how you did the someone else from the team's point of view, it's a good change, although not good considering Calleigh's dead and all but a nice read through and through. |